Talk:Japanese aircraft carrier Taiyō/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 12:10, 13 April 2017 (UTC)


 * Will start soon. Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  12:10, 13 April 2017 (UTC)

Criteria
GA Criteria:
 * 1
 * 1.a ✅
 * 1.b ✅
 * 2
 * 2.a ✅
 * 2.b ✅
 * 2.c ✅
 * 2.d ✅
 * 3
 * 3.a ✅
 * 3.b ✅
 * 4
 * 4.a ✅
 * 5
 * 5.a ✅
 * 6
 * 6.a ✅
 * 6.b ✅


 * No DAB links ✅
 * No dead links ✅
 * No copyvio ✅

Suggestions

 * "The ship torpedoed twice by American submarines with negligible to moderate damage before she was sunk in mid-1944 with heavy loss of life. Probably should "the ship was torpedoed twice by American submarines, with negligible to moderate damage, before she was sunk in mid-1944 with heavy loss of life."
 * Looks like somebody already added the missing "was", and I don't think the commas are necessary there.
 * That's all my suggestions. -- Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  21:14, 13 April 2017 (UTC)
 * - ditto my comment at the Chūyō review. Let me know if there's anything else you see holding up the article. Parsecboy (talk) 11:49, 26 May 2017 (UTC)