Talk:Japanese battleship Ise/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 22:22, 25 January 2018 (UTC)


 * " Hotchkiss 2.5-centimetre", later "were added for the 25 mm AA guns." If these are the same guns, perhaps the same units should be used?
 * "After the Americans began attacking Japanese installations in the Bonin Islands on 10 October," New heading, so remind folks who skipped down from the ToC what year we're in.
 * "but it did not attack the battleship, sinking the damaged Zuikaku and Zuihō." Do we need an "instead" before sinking here?
 * "They arrived two days later and remained there until the 12th when they departed for" I believe we're talking about December now?  Then you could remove "december" from the next sentence "The attack was cancelled on 30 December"
 * Probably should mention "Cape Engaño" in teh body, rather than just image captions, if it merits mentioning by name in the lead.
 * Nitpick: Ref 28 seems to be citing a single page, not pages.


 * This is great work, I'm picking the tiniest of nits here. Courcelles (talk) 22:56, 25 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Nits make lice so I'm happy for your thorough review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:14, 25 January 2018 (UTC)
 * And passed! Courcelles (talk) 23:24, 25 January 2018 (UTC)