Talk:Japanese battleship Yashima/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk · contribs) 12:21, 21 July 2012 (UTC)

I'll give this a review now and add points below as I come across them. Miyagawa  (talk)  12:21, 21 July 2012 (UTC)


 * The Port Arthur link in the lead is linking to a disambig page.
 * Fixed.
 * Description: Is there anyway to remove the two zeros from the end of the converted distance of the beam length, or is this stuck with the convert template?
 * Fixed
 * Construction and career: Could do with a link to Battle of Port Arthur.
 * Linked in the lede.
 * Thanks, I'd missed that. Miyagawa   (talk)  17:44, 21 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Could also do with some trunking to remove the year from the link to Russian cruiser Boyarin (1901).
 * Done. Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:46, 21 July 2012 (UTC)

Other than that, I think this is good to go. Once those tweaks are made, I'll happily promote this to GA. Incidentally I agree with your choice not to include the sinking postcard image in the article as the licensing is evidenced in the description. Miyagawa  (talk)  12:32, 21 July 2012 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

I believe the article meets all the criteria for GA, and therefore it's a pass. Good job. Miyagawa  (talk)  17:44, 21 July 2012 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail: