Talk:Japanese cruiser Naniwa/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 03:51, 17 June 2021 (UTC)


 * Link to Takachiho in the design section
 * Infobox gives crew of 325, body says 338
 * Infobox says completed in December 1885, prose says February 1886
 * Is what the ship did in 1891 known, or at least where it was primarily stationed?
 * "Jiyuan may have tried to pass to closely to Naniwa" - Should it be "too closely" (I'm bad with homophones)
 * Recommend splitting the Battle of the Yalu River section, as a good portion of it isn't about that battle.
 * Link the Boxer Rebellion
 * It looks like the page link for Duus needs tweaking, as it's showing up as pg. 1 in the results when it's really linking to pg. 82 on IA
 * Deleted the link to the specific page
 * Some sort of error in ref 48
 * Nothing's showing up on my computer
 * sources look reliable, and image licensing looks okay.

Placing on hold, good work. Hog Farm Talk 02:33, 18 June 2021 (UTC)
 * See if my changes are satisfactory. Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:07, 18 June 2021 (UTC)
 * I've fixed the ref error (apparently it was missing the pp=). Passing now. Hog Farm Talk 05:01, 19 June 2021 (UTC)