Talk:Japanese cruiser Tokiwa/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk · contribs) 16:12, 5 May 2015 (UTC)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * One dupe link in the lead
 * Watch ENGVAR, I see armor and armour
 * I'd probably pipe the link to Steregushchiy so it matches the other ships mentioned in the article.
 * "Tokiwa was third of six when..." - I know you're talking about Togo's line, but most will not.
 * Added "in line", but I'm not sure if I should clarify that it's of the 2nd Division. What do you think?
 * You could also pipe line of battle in - though I saw another reference to this earlier in the article, so the link should probably go there.
 * Done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:09, 6 May 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * Probably ought to give some context on the arrival of the 2nd Pacific Squadron - otherwise, readers will assume it's the ships from Port Arthur and Vladivostok
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * File:Japanese cruiser Tokiwa.jpg - need a source for this
 * Could find a source on Google image, but I'm not to concerned about this since it's obviously a postcard.
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Could find a source on Google image, but I'm not to concerned about this since it's obviously a postcard.
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Thanks for looking this over; now I've got to go and make changes to all the other articles from which I copy-pasted major sections! I think that I've dealt with all your comments, let me know if there's anything that I missed.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:03, 5 May 2015 (UTC)