Talk:Japanese destroyer Momi (1944)/GA1

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 03:00, 24 May 2023 (UTC)

Will review soon. Hog Farm Talk 03:00, 24 May 2023 (UTC)


 * Rohwer is listed as a source but not used
 * Article gives the name meaning as "fir tree", but Nevitt has "white fir"? It appears to be practically the same to my non-Japanese reading eyes, but maybe better to go with the exact translation in case there's some sort of different connotation with that?
 * Recommend a second ref to support the nature of Ikutagawa Maru as an ex-Italian reefer
 * "despite the presence of a nearby Allied convoy headed towards Lingayen Gulf. The two destroyers were spotted by American aircraft as heading directly for their convoy, so the Ikutagawa Maru may have already separated herself from her escorts by this time, and the three ships comprising the convoy's escort attempted to intercept them" - not in Nevitt. Maybe a misplaced reference?
 * Looks like maybe the page range for O'Hara should be 288-290 (barely hanging over onto that third page)?

I think that's it from me. Hog Farm Talk
 * Thanks for looking this over. See if my changes are satisfactory.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:13, 25 May 2023 (UTC)
 * Still not seeing where we have supported "The two destroyers were spotted by American aircraft as heading directly for their convoy", although I may be missing it. Hog Farm Talk 22:16, 25 May 2023 (UTC)
 * Finally found it.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:03, 26 May 2023 (UTC)