Talk:Jaqueline Kiplinger

TA Comments:

In-text citations: yes

Professional tone: yes

Paraphrasing real science: yes

Grammar and spelling: overall good

Links to other wiki articles: yes

Score: 20/20

Peer Review:

I think the paragraph is well written and the citations are really good. A few things might need be considered. First, when writing the equation, I think the period should go after the equation and maybe a comma should be used to connect the equation to the paragraph. Then, having one sentence as one paragraph seems to be a little bit weird. I am also wondering how people start thinking about using and making quantum. I think overall this section looks great!

ZHANG, YICHI Peer Review Score: 20/20