Talk:Jardine Matheson/Archives/2021

COI Requests for Jardine Matheson (2 of 2)
Just some followup requests after last month, organized by section (I have a COI and am not editing page directly for that reason). A few facts still outdated, some typos, a few wording recommendations were things sounded awkward. Thank you kindly for considering helping :) JeanetteM2 (talk) 01:59, 14 March 2021 (UTC)

Request - Intro Para Changes

 * Typo: 2nd sentence missing an "a" before "primary listing"


 * Remove   from subsidiary list in 3rd sentence (it was sold)


 * Replace  with


 * Link 1: https://www.bangkokpost.com/life/social-and-lifestyle/1352983/the-chosen-one
 * Link 2: https://www.scmp.com/article/711667/breaking-mental-health-barriers


 * Cut or move 2nd to last sentence, as it randomly singles out the company's size 8 years ago:

Request - Post-WWII Changes
To add details from source, please replace this 1st sentence:   with

Request - 1st Century Operations
Cut  from 2nd sentence listing current subsidiaries (it was sold).

Request - Dairy Farm Changes
Reword  as
 * 2nd sentence


 * Fourth sentence
 * 4th sentence listing supermarkets: Add
 * Link: https://www.reuters.com/article/yonghui-dairyfarm-idUSL3N10I5JV20150807
 * Alt link: https://www.ft.com/content/e1d4d1da-2208-11e4-9d4a-00144feabdc0


 * Please also add
 * Link: https://www.seafoodsource.com/news/environment-sustainability/hong-kong-s-supermarkets-making-slow-but-steady-improvements-in-sustainability-efforts


 * Remove:
 * Link: https://fox2now.com/news/haunting-images-show-empty-shop-n-save-stores-during-final-days/


 * Switch confusing  with

Request - Mandarin Oriental
Final sentence, change from 74% to 79%
 * Link: https://www.jardines.com/en/companies/mandarinoriental.html

Request - Jardine Cycle

 * 3rd sentence, replace the number in  with   and add Myanmar and Thailand
 * Link: https://www.jcclgroup.com/AR2019


 * 4th sentence: add Myanmar as a country where the subsidiary operates
 * Link: https://www.jcclgroup.com/AR2019

Request - Astra International Changes

 * Replace the 1st sentence,  with the more broad and accurate;


 * Link: https://www.jcclgroup.com/our-businesses/group-at-a-glance


 * In 2nd to last sentence, after  add
 * Link: https://www.jcclgroup.com/our-businesses/group-at-a-glance/astra#conftext-4985


 * Final sentence, remove
 * Link: https://www.thejakartapost.com/news/2020/04/22/astra-standard-chartered-sell-bank-permata-at-lower-price-to-bangkok-bank.html

Request - Corporate Structure

 * Change 4th sentence so it isn't missing the last Tai-pan:  to


 * Link: https://www.rothschildandco.com/en/who-we-are/corporate-governance/supervisory-board/adam-keswick-profile/


 * Final sentence, change  to the less surfery
 * Yes check.svg Done  ~  Aseleste  (t, e &#124; c, l) 07:06, 12 April 2021 (UTC)
 * @JeanetteM2: Special:Diff/1017341794 ~ Aseleste  (t, e &#124; c, l) 07:07, 12 April 2021 (UTC)
 * Thank you so much, I'm sure that took a bit of time - really nice to see the page looking updated and polished. JeanetteM2 (talk) 19:58, 16 May 2021 (UTC)