Talk:Jared C. Monti

Jared C. Monti on Flickr
The US Army has published a ton of Jared C. Monti Photographs on it's Flickr Photostream:


 * http://www.flickr.com/photos/soldiersmediacenter/
 * http://www.flickr.com/photos/soldiersmediacenter/3928494663/ —Preceding unsigned comment added by 70.127.165.250 (talk) 21:58, 5 October 2009 (UTC)
 * http://www.flickr.com/search/?q=monti&w=35703177@N00 —Preceding unsigned comment added by 70.127.165.250 (talk) 21:53, 5 October 2009 (UTC)

clearing up the sourcing issues.
Kumioko, I'm still bewildered by your sources section, particularly by the fact that you now have something called "specific" and "general". I have no idea what you mean by this.

==Sources== ===Notes and citations===

Everything that you have included in the or  parameters in your article goes here. Some people choose to divide their citations from their notes, in which they use a special notation system to cluster things together. You know how to do this. In this case they would have a sub section called notes and a subsection called citations.

There is no division of material here among specific kinds of sources, for example, things that you quoted, things that you cited, things that you consulted. Material that is specifically about Monti and material that is generally about Afghanistan is equal.

You might want to call these by other names. As long as it is clear to your readers, and more or less in line with what is generally done on Wikipedia, then I don't have problems with that. Don't try to swim against the current. You won't get anywhere.

===Bibliography=== EVERYTHING that you have cited should be listed here again, especially if you plan to tak the article to ACR or FA (especially here!) The listing here goes in bibliographic format, not footnote or citation format (see MOS).

Anything else related to the subject but that you have not cited does NOT go here. If there is anything you have consulted that informed your general information about the piece, it must be cited (above), and included here. Some of your teachers might want you to include a list of books (or whatever) called sources consulted, separate from sources cited. WP doesn't want that. If you consulted it, you cite it. Other things that someone might read belongs in a section called

===Further reading===

Does this help? I promise you I'm not trying to be difficult. You squeaked by the ACR on the other because no one wanted to deal with it, but we should have. Auntieruth55 (talk) 20:29, 28 January 2010 (UTC)

National Defense Service Medal
Sgt Monti's ribbon rack should be updated to reflect two awards of the National Defense medal, not three. That would be the ribbon itself (for service in between August 2, 1990 and November 30, 1995) and a device/cluster denoting the second awarding (for service September 11, 2001 to a date to be announced). There are very few military members with three. Sgt Monti wasn't even born when it was the last award period concluded (1974). Thank you.

SFC Monti's ribbon rack needs to be cleaned up and properly done
SFC Monti's ribbon rack still needs to be updated. Oakleaf clusters are not used with the Good Conduct Medal's ribbon or the NCO Professional Development Ribbon. The former uses clasps to indicate additional awards while the latter uses numerals to indicate the same. SFC Monti should have two claps on his Good Conduct Medal (not two clusters), his Overseas Service Ribbon should have number 3 on it (as opposed to nothing on it), his NCO professional development ribbon should have a numeral 2 on it (not a cluster), and SFC Monti was only awarded one NATO medal (the service star is not needed). His official autobiographical data is accessible to verify all this and information on appurtenances for awards can be found on page 278 of Army Regulation 670-1. If one were a little more anal about the details, oakleaf clusters are joined together when more than one is present--not separated. The effort is appreciated, but they should be displayed properly. Thanks much. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jgrdonquixote (talk • contribs) 22:44, 24 June 2011 (UTC)

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