Talk:Jason Robertson (ice hockey)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 04:03, 18 March 2022 (UTC)

Lead

 * You said He played for a number of minor ice hockey teams in Michigan but then list a GTHL team.
 * I think you meant to list Little Caesars and the Detroit Kings AAA team (per body)
 * Whoops, reworded.

Playing career

 * WL Paul McFarland
 * Could you WL hat-trick to Hat-trick?
 * If you are interested, Linus Nyman (third paragraph) qualifies for a Wiki article
 * Left an intentional redlink to remind me
 * Maybe mention that he participated in the 2016 CCM/USA Hockey All-American Prospects Game
 * Here's a reference
 * What was his draft rankings leading up to the NHL Draft? What did the NHL Central Scouting Bureau rank him?
 * Northville's Robertson could get an early draft call
 * He was also drafted by the Omaha Lancers in the USHL Futures Draft
 * 
 * Please change Gabe to Gabriel Vilardi to bypass the redirect.
 * WL OHL All-Star Third Team to 2017–18 OHL season
 * He was also drafted by the Omaha Lancers in the USHL Futures Draft
 * 
 * Please change Gabe to Gabriel Vilardi to bypass the redirect.
 * WL OHL All-Star Third Team to 2017–18 OHL season
 * WL OHL All-Star Third Team to 2017–18 OHL season
 * WL OHL All-Star Third Team to 2017–18 OHL season

Addressed all comments to this point! —  Ghost River  18:43, 5 April 2022 (UTC)

Continued review
Done all! Thank you for the review and for working on getting a photo – my media/press pass for the Farg only applies to concerts and I've been trying to get it expanded. Hoping the ballpark will give me one soon. —  Ghost River  21:25, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
 * Pls WL OHL Third All-Star Team	and OHL First All-Star Team	in the Awards and Honours section
 * Also, it should be Awards and Honors (not u) because he is American
 * Pls WL NHL Rookie of the Month to List of 2020–21 NHL Three Star Awards
 * , Everything else looks good and I am working on getting a photo for you as well! HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 18:49, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
 * , It's cool that you have a pass at all! I will pass this article but I am still trying to get a photo. The Stars discord seems kinda dead and Twitter/Flickr is not revealing much. You'd think someone as successful as he has been would have a plethora of free photos to choose from fans etc.. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 17:36, 6 April 2022 (UTC)