Talk:Jay Abraham

Advertising and Superlatives
Although this is an article worthy topic it needs to be written less like an advert. There are far too many superlatives, too much description of books which read like sales blurbs and do not show their connection to other areas and too much back slapping. I don't doubt that he's a clever marketer, just please save all the superlatives for his homepage.

JASpencer (talk) 20:47, 21 May 2013 (UTC)

Thank you [User:JASpencer|JASpencer]] for your feedback. I've removed the superlatives that you mentioned as well as the excess information that may be mistaken for a sales blurb. Do you think you can review the article?

Mellyp7 (talk) 21:52, 21 May 2013 (UTC)

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