Talk:Jean Charles de Menezes/to do


 * 1) Add details from the inquest when they come out.
 * 2) Continue to use and  to document sources.
 * 3) Continue to reword for clarity and brevity.
 * 4) Please attribute and cite sources accurately with regards to the IPCC leaked documents.
 * 5) If you have not recently, please review NPOV tutorial.
 * 6) This is an encyclopedic article, and should be written from an historical perspective, as if it would be read the same 1 year or 100 years from now. The prevailing tense of sentences should be past-tense. Also avoid phrases such as "The latest reports indicate..."
 * 7) Use British English for this British/Brazilian topic.
 * 8) This article ought to be slimmed down! Suggestions:
 * 9) Use footnotes to explain items rather than explaining them inline
 * 10) Propose a series of smaller articles on the incident and aftermath
 * 11) Just edit down, remove every unnecessary word
 * 12) The notes needs to be numbered correctly - it's a mess
 * 13) clean up description of the incident itself, it is not easy to follow and makes little sense as is