Talk:Jean Creton/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 16:28, 20 February 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges  Consermonor   Opus meum  16:28, 20 February 2018 (UTC)

Criteria
GA Criteria:
 * 1
 * 1.a ✅
 * 1.b ✅
 * 2
 * 2.a ✅
 * 2.b ✅
 * 2.c ✅
 * 2.d ✅ (6.5% is highest, due to incidental mirroring of three phrases)
 * 3
 * 3.a ✅
 * 3.b ✅
 * 4
 * 4.a ✅
 * 5
 * 5.a ✅
 * 6
 * 6.a ✅
 * 6.b ✅
 * No DAB links ✅
 * No Dead links ✅
 * Images appropriately licensed ✅
 * Passing now, will add prose suggestions at a late date. Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  15:02, 28 February 2018 (UTC)

Prose Suggestions

 * Creton travelled to Ireland with the King on his expeditionary force in May that year, but was sent back to Wales with the Earl of Salisbury two months later. suggest changing that year to 1399, as it is the first mention of the date in the body.
 * found in most such works of the period, "provides, in essentials, a credible account" suggest removing such
 * who having been captured with Richard (and, indeed, executed the following year) suggest changing having to have.
 * that is all my prose suggestions. -- Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  13:45, 5 March 2018 (UTC)
 * Cheers,, I've utilised those suggestions. Have a good week!  ...SerialNumber  54129 ...speculates 14:08, 5 March 2018 (UTC)