Talk:Jeans (film)/GA2

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 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose):  (MoS):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references):
 * a (citations to reliable sources):
 * a(OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects):  (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall: Hold for now.
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Comments:
 * Some residual issues from the first GA review:
 * Grammar mistakes in lead. The plot section is duplicated more than I'd expect in the lead. A general plot summary should be in the lead, at best. Check over WP:LEAD.
 * Comments:
 * Some residual issues from the first GA review:
 * Grammar mistakes in lead. The plot section is duplicated more than I'd expect in the lead. A general plot summary should be in the lead, at best. Check over WP:LEAD.


 * The plot section is obviously going to be very narrative, however I believe it needs some tightening up. Overall, give it a read through and ensure someone can follow its prose.


 * Just a note that there's no need to use a wikilink everytime a word comes up, eg United States. Use it on first instance.


 * As for refs, check over to ensure that the facts being cited are contained within the ref itself.


 * Overall I'll check back in a week to see if these minor issues are considered and fixed. If so we should be able to pass the article. Nja247 (talk • contribs) 13:18, 16 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Review closed. No notable edits made over the past twelve days to remedy outstanding issues. Nja 247 (talk • contribs) 08:32, 28 November 2008 (UTC)