Talk:Jeff Wayne's Musical Version of The War of the Worlds – The New Generation/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: IndianBio (talk · contribs) 10:45, 9 June 2015 (UTC)


 * First of all a huge rearrangement is needed. The prose portion of the article should come before any cast/credits/track list. I strongly suggest you see a GA level album article like, for eg: I'm Breathless or most recently Cheek to Cheek. The layout I propose is as follows:
 * Background - talking about the background and development of the album
 * Composition - songs being played
 * Critical reception and release - this is utmost important to list any critical review that the album has received
 * Tour and promotion
 * Track listing
 * Credits and cast.

Once you are done with this rearrangement, I will proceed. — Indian: BIO  [ ChitChat ] 06:03, 10 June 2015 (UTC)
 * IndianBio, I see what you mean. I have re-ordered the sections and inserted a new heading: Critical reception, which I see you are right, it is important. I will immediately start writing this section, but offline, and insert it into the article as soon as possible; it may take a few weeks. Please tell me: As I don't believe I can add more than this new section, do you agree this will be sufficient? Prhartcom (talk) 13:25, 11 June 2015 (UTC)
 * I can see that it is just a beginning in the major changes for the article. I don't think that the GA review would be the correct place for this to happen. I suggest withdrawing this nomination and then work on it in your sandbox and then renominate. You can notify me then, I will surely review it. At present this is a clear-cut GA fail. — Indian: BIO  [ ChitChat ] 07:19, 12 June 2015 (UTC)
 * GA withdrawn by nominator, hence failing. — Indian: BIO  [ ChitChat ] 13:44, 12 June 2015 (UTC)