Talk:Jeff Wrana

Lead(?)
Hi, thanks for this article. I think the second sentences of the lead are a little jargon-y -- imo it's hard to read through He is the CIBC Breast Cancer Research Scientist and Mary Janigan Research Chair in Molecular Cancer Therapeutic at Mount Sinai Hospital and University of Toronto (U of T). As a Tier 1 Canada Research Chair in Medical Genetics and Microbiology at U of T without knowing what CIBC means, the significance of the long name of his role, what a 'Tier 1 Canada Research Chair in Medical Genetics and Microbiology' is. It might be helpful to replace some of it with simpler explanations of what the roles/his work are. Let me know your thoughts, it's entirely up to you. My brain could just not be working, it's been a long weekend. Eddie891 Talk Work 21:36, 23 April 2023 (UTC)


 * @Eddie891 I agree, that's something I didn't acknowledge in my original DYK review...
 * Luckily, I think it should be easy to simplify those sentences. Oltrepier (talk) 08:19, 26 April 2023 (UTC)