Talk:Jehovah's Witnesses congregational discipline/Archive 2

Not Notable?
If this means that the details of our disciplinary procedures are not of particular interest to the general public, but mainly those in the congregation, or those somehow affected by this discipline, then some details might be excessive. For example, the list of 30 offenses might be left to a ref. The Restriction of duties section is essentially summed up in the 'reproof' section. 'procedures' might be condensed, and merged with the intro. A lot could be condensed, or eliminated. I would like to work on condensing this to reflect what might be of interest to the general public.--Brotherlawrence (talk) 00:10, 28 January 2008 (UTC)


 * Here is the Wikipedia definition of notable: "to be notable if it has received significant coverage in reliable sources that are independent of the subject." The page which deals with "Wikipedia Notability" is http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Notability

Failed.
 * "Presumed" means objective evidence meets the criterion, without regard for the subjective personal judgments of editors. Substantive coverage in reliable sources suggests that the subject is notable.

Failed.
 * "Significant coverage" means that sources address the subject directly in detail, and no original research is needed to extract the content. Significant coverage is more than trivial but may be less than exclusive.

Failed.
 * "Reliable" means sources need editorial integrity to allow verifiable evaluation of notability, per the reliable source guideline. Sources may encompass published works in all forms and media. Availability of secondary sources covering the subject are a good test for notability.

Failed.
 * "Sources," defined on Wikipedia as secondary sources, provide the most objective evidence of notability. The number and nature of reliable sources needed varies depending on the depth of coverage and quality of the sources. Multiple sources are generally preferred.

Failed. --Editor2020 (talk) 03:18, 28 January 2008 (UTC)
 * "Independent of the subject" excludes works produced by those affiliated with the subject including (but not limited to): self-publicity, advertising, self-published material by the subject, autobiographies, press releases, etc.

Leaders
I removed the term 'leaders' in reference to elders. This is how Witnesses view that title. > Awake! 9/8/76 p. 28 Are Clergy-Laity Distinctions Scriptural? | “Furthermore, those serving as elders in the first-century congregation were under command to avoid taking a superior position with reference to its members. No man was to be viewed as an official leader or head of the congregation. .. Jesus Christ stated: “do not call anyone your father on earth, for one is your Father, the heavenly One. Neither be called ‘leaders,’ for your Leader is one, the Christ” —Preceding unsigned comment added by Brotherlawrence (talk • contribs) 17:39, 27 February 2008 (UTC)
 * "Those taking the lead" is commonly used in JW literature as a euphemism for elders, i.e. leaders.--Jeffro77 (talk) 09:57, 4 May 2008 (UTC)
 * "No problem. It was technically correct in this setting, just felt it was not in the spirit of Watchtower phraseology .--Brotherlawrence (talk) 14:32, 5 May 2008 (UTC)

In Thailand, they refer to the elders as Leaders.

Organ transplants and disfellowshipping
There is a suggestion to delete an information about disfellowshipping for organ transplants, because it has no proof (according to my data) from WT publications and "citation needed" template is hanging for about 2 weeks.

See also: -- ShiftWokl (talk) 19:44, 20 June 2008 (UTC)

Reasons
There should be some indication of the list of reasons for which a person can be disfellowshipped, (though not broken down into minutia). There should also be a link to Jehovah's Witnesses and child sex abuse and the handling of such cases.--Jeffro77 (talk) 12:24, 8 September 2008 (UTC)

Original Research
The whole article is a personal collection of quotations, in order the editor's assumptions may be proved. I strongly believe that this article shouldn't exist at all in Wikipedia, as it wouldn't in any other encyclopaedia. Only topics that can be repeatedly found in important articles or books can become articles.

--Vassilis78 (talk) 11:06, 10 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Shunning of former members, as well as the attitudes JWs hold towards former members, are significant issues regarding the JW religion. The means by which this occurs is therefore also of significance. The article is fully referenced with support from official JW policy. While that may qualify for a 'primary sources' tag (though JW publications are the best source of information about JW beliefs or policies), it doesn't justify the 'original research' tag.-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 11:54, 10 October 2008 (UTC)


 * Shunning is an important sociological topic that has been analyzed in courts, by public officials and other scientists, as was the case with the faredation of Germany before the granting of the status of a public entity to the German JW organization. However, I cannot recollect that the same occurs with the matter of the congragational discipline in general. The fact that Ray Franz has critized the policy of JW organization as regards its congregational discipline does not mean that we can make our list of citations from the primary sources and give our report on the subject, making a whole article. Something similar occurs with the pedophile scandal article. Generally I believe that this article must be become lesser in size and be merged with the article of the controversies, as the one of the controveries.--Vassilis78 (talk) 14:28, 10 October 2008 (UTC)

No Christian denominations consider the Witnesses legit christians. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 70.217.169.157 (talk) 20:00, 20 October 2008 (UTC)

The second paragraph of "Disfellowshipping" is completely unsourced. Could we include some referenc-able material here? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 99.241.41.173 (talk) 21:08, 20 December 2008 (UTC)

Is www.Jwfacts.com a neutral site?
They're used as a source for "Disfellowshipping". —Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.70.107.85 (talk) 12:41, 18 February 2009 (UTC)

www.jwfacts.com seem to be a personal web-site which status is analogous to the self-published books, so I think it cannot be used as a source.--Vassilis78 (talk) 08:34, 10 April 2009 (UTC)


 * The issue is really whether JWfacts is a reliable source. It fails that test by being a self-published source. The article in question at does provide its sources, so those sources, mainly WT publications, are better transferred to the article itself rather than using JWFacts as the source. I have deleted the citation. LTSally (talk) 09:57, 10 April 2009 (UTC)

List of serious sins
Come on. This tight section was a simple, succinct LIST of serious sins for the sake of convenience. It seems like elaborations should be somewhere other than the paragraph body of a "list" section of an article about discipline (rather than about "sin"). Where does it end? Does the next person add an aside that fornication includes anal sex and mutual masturbation? Does someone else add that bestiality does not include semen retrieval for animal husbandry? That stuff dilutes the main subject. If you editors feel the information needs to get out there, create an article "Jehovah's Witnesses and serious sin" and link to it.--AuthorityTam (talk) 11:45, 4 May 2009 (UTC)
 * I agree. Please note that the parenthetical statement I added was a concession after User:Stingraywiki reverted my initial removal of their repetetive and wordy elaborations.-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 08:27, 5 May 2009 (UTC)


 * Actions for which a member can be disfellowshipped include: Abortion, adultery, apostasy,[18] bestiality, blood transfusions, drug abuse, drunkenness, extortion, fornication, fraud, gambling, heresy, homosexual activity, idolatry, incest, interfaith activity, "loose conduct",[19] lying, [20] manslaughter, murder, "perverted sex relations",[21] polygamy, pornography,[22] reviling, sexual abuse, slander, spiritism, theft, and use of tobacco.


 * Most of these "serious sins" lack sources, should they not be removed? Or must one simply trust the information to be factual, without being able to verify any of it?
 * ViezeRick (talk) 13:27, 26 March 2011 (UTC)
 * I don't have time at the moment, though adding sources for each of the elements listed will not be especially difficult, and I'm not aware that anything in the list is contested. Is there any item in particular you're disputing?-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 14:13, 26 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Actually, I can not dispute what I can't verify, wich is why I question that list. The sources need to be straight from the Watchtower organisation since it's their opinion, and they're not keen on having this out in the open, if you ask me. Printed publications are hard to get my hands on, they tend to be absent in public libraries, and Google is not my friend when it comes to Watchtower publications. I have just spent hours, searching in German, Dutch and English. If you could provide me with the required information, you'd make me a very happy person. Thanks in advance. Regards, ViezeRick (talk) 16:43, 26 March 2011 (UTC)
 * P.S. This article doesn't mention voting or any other kind of political activity. Political activity and voting are debated on the Dutch Wikipedia at the moment, but I can't verify the sources. Most of it seems interpretation. Do you have any idea why it's not mentioned on the English Wiki? Any sources perhaps? ViezeRick (talk) 17:06, 26 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Years ago, JWs were more strict about voting but now operate a kind of 'don't ask - don't tell' policy. They're 'allowed' to go to the polling booth, where "What he does in the polling booth is between him and his Creator". (This policy seems to be to absolve JW corporations from legal responsibility to members who are prosecuted by governments for failing to vote.) However, if a JW were to publically announce voting in connection with political views, they would still be subjected to disciplinary measures (specifically, they would be 'counselled' and if they 'rejected counsel', the elders would say they had 'disassociated' resulting in shunning). (The Watchtower 1 November 1999 page 28-29; Shepherd the Flock of God, page 112).-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 00:58, 27 March 2011 (UTC)
 * I have supplied sources as requested. I have removed 'heresy' from the list because JWs use the term 'apostasy', which is already listed.-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 02:49, 27 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Hi, thanks for your response.
 * So, if JW's talk about their political views, do they risk excommunication? And if a JW is seen entering a voting booth by a fellow member or an Elder, would that JW be 'counselled'? Won't the Elder ask what the JW was doing in there? Regards ViezeRick (talk) 09:39, 28 March 2011 (UTC)
 * According to the Watchtower I cited previously, a JW wouldn't be 'counselled' for attending a polling booth. However, they would likely be 'counselled' and possibly face 'excommunication' if they were to espouse political views.-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 10:41, 28 March 2011 (UTC)

External link
Are you serious?


 * 1) A link to a blog?
 * 2) With an illegal recording?

--Scientia est opulentia (talk) 07:10, 3 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Whether it's illegal rather than just disapproved by JW judicial committees is highly dubious. The blog is indeed not a suitable external link for this article.-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 08:33, 3 September 2009 (UTC)


 * Yes, I am serious. The style guideline at External links does indeed suggest that links to blogs be avoided. This is a guideline only, and exceptions are allowed. I believe that this blog is such an exception. The opinions expressed on the blog are of secondary importance only. The critical content of the blog is the audio recording of a judicial committee hearing of an individual who has himself uploaded the content to the internet with the intention of it being heard. The subject of the article is disciplinary procedures of Jehovah's Witnesses, including juducial committees. The inclusion of a recording of a complete judicial committee hearing is a valuable addition to the written material in the article. It is informative, instructive and quite rare. You claim the recording is illegal. It is certainly contrary to the policies of Jehovah's Witness judicial committee hearings, but that's not a crime. But you may have additional information that would support your claim that the recording is contrary to law.


 * Thank you for finally raising this issue on the talk page. Just weeks ago you made a complaint to administrators that I had made a personal attack against you, so I find it strange that you removed the link to the blog with the comment "You are just adding evidence for your destructive presence in Wikipedia." You have previously accused me of making destructive edits, and I am still waiting for any evidence to support this serious claim, which is tantamount to accusing me of vandalism. In most cases I am simply adding well-sourced factual material you don't like to see because it portrays your religion in a less than flattering light. LTSally (talk) 08:37, 3 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Jeffro, please elaborate further on why you think it is "not suitable." I've explained my rationale for including it, I want to hear some better reasons than that for deleting it. LTSally (talk) 08:44, 3 September 2009 (UTC)


 * "Exceptions" to guidelines are allowed when there is consensus for them. In this case, there clearly isn't. Please desist. --LjL (talk) 12:16, 3 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Actually, I won't desist. The link was placed there only a matter of hours ago. So far three editors have made a comment opposing its conclusion. This is too soon to claim any consensus, and too soon for you to order me to stop arguing in favor of its inclusion. LTSally (talk) 12:29, 3 September 2009 (UTC)

Incidents like this create an interesting window into the thought process of certain editors, so personally I don't mind them. Editorially, however, the primary regrettable thing is that, now, that (likely illegal recording) link is parked in the history of the page. --AuthorityTam (talk) 17:25, 3 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Jeffro77 you said, "Whether it's illegal rather than just disapproved by JW judicial committees is highly dubious." This is not the case; it is a matter of privacy violation. An encyclopedia -at least- cannot contain unofficially publicized material relating to private conversations. Also, is this a reportage page? --  pvasiliadis 09:50, 3 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Whose privacy is being violated? The individual on trial from this church court has clearly approved of his case being made public at his Death or Obedience blogsite. Those who made the allegations should have no shame about, or objection to, their accusations being made public, since the accused has no objection. Their evidence consisted of the viewpoints of the accused expressed – at their invitation – at a prior shepherding call. They accused him of "spreading" apostate views ... in this case, sharing his views with them in a pastoral visit in response to their questions. The accused has no objection about that being publicised either. Jehovah's Witnesses' judicial committees are held as a secretive court session with no observers and no subsequent report of evidence or defence. This recording is a valuable record of such proceedings and a link to it on an article dealing with disciplinary procedures is entirely appropriate. LTSally (talk) 10:31, 3 September 2009 (UTC)
 * In most Western countries, and I believe this is the case with USA as well, illegal is the recording which is done without the permission of the people involved. Beyond that fact, Wikipedia is not a place of experiment for people who want to make "investigations" or any sort of original reseach.--Scientia est opulentia (talk) 11:15, 3 September 2009 (UTC)
 * "Illegal is the recording which is done"... Thanks for that, Yoda. Additionally, wherever is allowed by law, the Watch Tower Society asserts that their records are not subject to applicable privacy laws, particularly when such laws require divulging information normally entitled to individuals held about them by corporations. Either they are subject to privacy laws, or they're not, not both. In any case, the blog is not a suitable source for reference on Wikipedia.-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 11:34, 3 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Jeffro, you are simply repeating your phrase without substantiating the claim. The blog itself is unimportant: whether that individual is a reliable source or not is irrelevant in this case. The blog is simply a host of the recording, which is a factual and informative resource in itself. As noted above, Wikipedia's policies and guidelines do not prohibit the use of blogs as external links. LTSally (talk) 11:42, 3 September 2009 (UTC)
 * The matter may be discussed here: .--Scientia est opulentia (talk) 12:15, 3 September 2009 (UTC)
 * I've posted comment over there (See diff).

As I stated at the RS noticeboard, Jehovah's Witnesses are avid contributors to this article, so I'm baffled at why they shy from adding a link to a recording that cuts out the middle man, allowing the public to hear for themselves JW disciplinary procedures in action. I'll point out a couple of things at WP:EL no one seems to have bothered to read: It is entirely appropriate and informative to provide a link to a recording of a judicial committee in session as a research aid. Arguments involving original research are entirely spurious. Now someone is suggesting they could all be actors. The one valid argument against its inclusion thus far expressed deals with the fact that it was surreptiously recorded. I have yet to be convinced it is a strong argument. The other figures in the recording are not on trial themselves and speak only about the accused person's actions, so it is hardly going to embarrass them. Claims that it is illegal to record the meeting or host it on a website have not yet been proven. How many times have media organizations secretly recorded meetings or conversations and broadcast them? It's a nightly event on public affairs TV shows.
 * Introduction: Such (linked) pages could contain further research that is accurate and on-topic, information that could not be added to the article for reasons such as copyright or amount of detail, or other meaningful, relevant content that is not suitable for inclusion in an article for reasons unrelated to its accuracy.
 * What should be linked: Sites that contain neutral and accurate material that cannot be integrated into the Wikipedia article due to copyright issues ... interview transcripts, or online textbooks) or other reasons.
 * What to link: Consider: Is the site content proper in the context of the article (useful, tasteful, informative, factual, etc.)?

Finally, AuthorityTam, just deal with the issue, rather than making sarcastic, derogatory comments about "the thought process of certain editors". LTSally (talk) 21:37, 3 September 2009 (UTC) As I implied over there, the legal issues are now superfluous but still serious. Anyone can opine about what they may feel the law should be, but the law is the law. For example, California's Invasion of Privacy Act (see Online) requires the consent of all parties to an in-person conversation prior to recording, and considers violators punishable by criminal and civil action. Of course, this thread discusses a source which has been rejected for other reasons, so it's unproductive to have a lengthy legal discussion here. --AuthorityTam (talk) 14:28, 4 September 2009 (UTC)
 * It seems sad (and revealing) when an editor believes the term "interesting" constitutes a "derogatory comment" (compare diff).

Wikipedia should not be seen to promote information that has been obtained unethically (unless that information has thereafter gained notoriety in reliable sources), as is a surreptitiously recorded conversation without the consent of its participants. Whether the recording is legal or not, the article should not link to it, and it is better to err on the side of caution. The recording is not a published source and fails WP:reliable, regardless of how desirable it might be to present an 'inside view'.-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 02:14, 5 September 2009 (UTC)


 * If it's legal, it's legal, if not not, let's not bring idle and vague questions of "ethics" into Wikipedia, whose purpose is to be an Encyclopedia period. As for not being reliable and published, that's a requirement for sources, not for external links. --LjL (talk) 12:05, 5 September 2009 (UTC)
 * So you maintain that it's fine to link to a recording that was obtained without the knowledge or permission of the subjects? Would your lack of concern for ethics be the same if it were you who were recorded without your consent.-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 12:31, 5 September 2009 (UTC)
 * It may or may not be fine, depending on whether or not it falls into WP:BLP. Your second question is irrelevant, because there is not a glimpse of an encyclopedic reason why I, personally, would be in any way included into Wikipedia. I've done nothing notable. --LjL (talk) 12:48, 5 September 2009 (UTC)
 * You've (deliberately?) missed the point. The recording is not appropriate for linking from Wikipedia for the same reason that it wouldn't be admissible in a court of law. Indeed, the individual who made the recording, like you, has done nothing notable.-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 14:34, 5 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Thank you for the (gratuitous?) assumption of bad faith, and nice non-sequitur. --LjL (talk) 17:39, 5 September 2009 (UTC)
 * The arguments against its inclusion are becoming increasingly bizarre. The farcical suggestion has already been made that the whole thing could be a fabrication involving actors, now there is the objection that it's unusable because it would inadmissable in a court of law and that the individual who made the recordings is himself not notable. Were all those whose conversations recorded on the Watergate tapes aware they were being taped? Should reference to those tapes now be deleted from Wikipedia? The notability or otherwise of the Witness who recorded his church trial is irrelevant, because he is not the subject of an article, and I wouldn't consider adding him to the article. The audio recording, an extraordinary document, simply supplements information within the article, which delves into the minutia of how the religion exercises control over its followers with a highly-developed system of judgment and punishment. An external link is just that: a link to something outside the confines of Wikipedia that provides additional information pertinent to the subject. LTSally (talk) 23:01, 5 September 2009 (UTC)
 * It's a matter of principle, which sometimes people do not understand when they feel they have to 'bring down the Watch Tower' at all costs. There is no similarity in this situation to Watergate. If the linked recording had already become notable in mainstream media, then it would be suitable for Wikipedia to link to it. Such is simply not the case with this recording.-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 02:27, 6 September 2009 (UTC)
 * LTSally, what you are suggesting is that it is fine to link to any piece of original research that support any particular view, irrespective of how the information was collected. A slippery slope indeed. The fact that it might be unique or rare does not change the fact that it is not notable (by Wikipedia definition) and original research.-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 03:10, 6 September 2009 (UTC)
 * I do hope the comment "The farcical suggestion has already been made that the whole thing could be a fabrication involving actors", wasn't directed at my comments below. I think I made it very clear that I was not suggesting the video is fake. (In fact, my personal opinion is that the video should be linked to, but personal opinions are not how to decide issues like this). There is one specific test for including an external link (since relevancy, etc., are not an issue), and this whether it comes from a knowledgable source. I think all I suggested was due to the problems these days with internet videos, it would be helpful if there was some confirmation regarding the video. The "legal" issue is not for this group to decide. The privacy issue is a red herring - that's part of the legality, and that's for the Wikipedia administration to decide, not us editors. Singularity42 (talk) 23:14, 5 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Sorry, no, that suggestion was first made here by someone else. Oh, and to clarify: it's actually audio, not video. But the issues stand. LTSally (talk) 23:28, 5 September 2009 (UTC)
 * It is evident that a few people simply do not understand why it isn't appropriate. I will therefore put it before the admin noticeboard to decide whether endorsing a recording made surreptitiously without the participants' permission or knowledge is appropriate, under the principle of bringing the Wikipedia project into disrepute.-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 02:22, 6 September 2009 (UTC)

I would ask editors commenting on this issue to consider adding their comments to the breakdown posted below the RfC for ease of following the debates on the various seperate issues regarding posting the external link. Thanks! Singularity42 (talk) 04:49, 6 September 2009 (UTC)

Request for comment on link to blog containing surreptitious audio recording
I'd appreciate some outside comment on my wish to add an external link to a blog that contains a recording of a Jehovah's Witness judicial committee in session to hear charges against a Witness charged with apostasy. I added the link, it was removed and another editor began the discussion in the section directly above (External link). A discussion was also attempted at Reliable sources/Noticeboard, although that noticeboard is probably not the place to debate the issue, because it's only obliquely connected with a question of reliable sources.

As a quick summary of what is spelt out above, I believe the link is a suitable and appropriate link to additional outside material that pertains directly to the subject under discussion, viz disciplinary procedures of Jehovah's Witnesses. The article itself already delves into great detail of disciplinary procedures. The audio recording, hosted at the blog, supplements this: it is valuable, useful and informative. I concede that the link is to a blog, which WP:EL says should generally be avoided, although this is not a prohibition, and exceptions are allowed. I also concede the recording was made surreptitiously and contrary to the policies surrounding JW judicial committee hearings. Both these factors clearly make the issue contentious.

So far the arguments stated against its inclusion are that (1) It is illegal. (There is so far no proof that is the case). (2) It is not suitable. (3) It violates privacy (of whom or what has not been stated. Please note that the recording has been added to a blog by the individual who went on trial at this church court. He has therefore deliberately abandoned any claim to privacy). (4) The recording constitutes original research. Only a small group of editors has so far commented, and most of these are Jehovah's Witnesses, which may affect their strong view against it. I'll add that there's been an element of personal abuse directed at me for pursuing this. I'd like to hear the views of a wider group of editors. LTSally (talk) 13:47, 4 September 2009 (UTC)

The link is here. Because there were objections to an EL to a blog, there is the option of providing a link to the recording as a podcast on iTunes here. LTSally (talk) 01:53, 8 September 2009 (UTC)

The link is most obviously disallowed because it is to a contested controversial primary source from a personal blog, a source without any secondary support. There is no way to verify that it is what it purports to be, or that it has not been edited to remove important context. --AuthorityTam (talk) 14:34, 4 September 2009 (UTC)
 * I commented, and my objections to the source certainly aren't religiously motivated.
 * The first two checkpoints for the inclusion of any material into the encyclopedia are neutrality and source reliability. If this audio recording had been acquired and distributed by The New York Times or BBC News, then we could get into the privacy and illegality concerns. But this recording comes from a personal blog (by definition a primary source, and possibly the worst type of source other than "I heard it through the grapevine") and was posted by an individual with a specific position or intent (however justifiable or non-justifiable that may be). This source has failed the first two checkpoints. Unless it gains significant attention in news sources, we cannot justify its inclusion in the encyclopedia. --Hemlock Martinis (talk) 18:01, 4 September 2009 (UTC)
 * I think it's being proposed as an external link, though, not as a source. --LjL (talk) 18:18, 4 September 2009 (UTC)
 * And we don't care that it is confirmed as being illegal under Florida law?-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 10:50, 8 September 2009 (UTC)

The primary source vs. secondary source argument for reliable sources is a bit irrelevant here. From WP:ELMAYBE, types of external links that could be considered are: Sites which fail to meet criteria for reliable sources yet still contain information about the subject of the article from knowledgeable sources.

The bigger question is this: it is a knowledgeable source? It could be faked, etc. Personally, I wouldn't be comfortable having an external link such as this without some confirmation the video is what it claims to be. Singularity42 (talk) 18:42, 4 September 2009 (UTC)
 * "It could be faked". Highly doubtful, considering the hours of other audio recordings taken at the shepherding visits that preceded it and the recording of a discussion with another elder at a Kingdom Hall. If it's a fake, then so if Michael Jackson's death. Both are possible, but the evidence strongly suggests otherwise. A "knowledgeable" source? It is simply a recording of something that took place. How much knowledge is required? The writing and other content at the blog are unimportant and irrelevant. The blog is simply the host site of the recording. LTSally (talk) 20:54, 4 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Don't get me wrong. I agree the issue is over the video, not the fact that it is hosted on a blog - therefore, the blog aspect is irrelevant. Nor am I saying the video is fake. I'm just saying generally speaking I tend to be more comfortable with internet videos when there is some secondary source confirming the content is what it is claimed to be. Singularity42 (talk) 21:56, 4 September 2009 (UTC)

Since a) the comments on this issue are spread all over this talk page, and b) I expect we'll be seeing more comments now that this is posted at WP:CNB, I thought it might make sense to concentrate the comments regarding the proposed external link in one place, broken down by concerns. Hopefully this will help us follow the various debates. Also, feel free to add additional concerns if I missed one... Singularity42 (talk) 04:41, 6 September 2009 (UTC)

Doesn't meet WP:RS?

 * Comment - WP:RS doesn't apply as this is an external link. WP:EL specifically allows as a possibility links to content that wouldn't otherwise be a reliable source. Therefore, primary vs. secondary sources shouldn't apply. Singularity42 (talk)
 * Comment - The principle of reliable sources still applies. Otherwise, anyone could add any source they like on any article under the guise of an 'external link' in order promote content that would otherwise be considered unnotable or unreliable.-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 05:09, 6 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Comment - As per Singularity. WP:EL allows links to sites that fail to meet criteria for reliable sources yet still contain information about the subject of the article from knowledgeable sources. I'd say an individual who has been tried by a judicial committee is very knowledgeable about the procedure, especially his own hearing, which is the subject of the audio. And if WP:EL sets aside requirements for RS on a qualified basis, it is unsound reasoning to appeal to the "principle of reliable sources" to then insist that those same requirements be applied. LTSally (talk) 10:14, 6 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Knowledgeable applies to someone who is an expert on a subject, not merely someone who has experienced something. If I survive a cyclone, it doesn't necessarily make me "knowledgeable" about cyclones. Additionally, the recording doesn't contain any information (knowledgeable or otherwise) about JC meetings.-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 11:01, 6 September 2009 (UTC)


 * Reply: The link doesn't purport to, nor need it, contain information about judicial committee hearings. It is an example of one, and informative simply on that basis. Why? The elderrs explain repeatedly they are following procedure to the letter. An elder explains the procedure, explains how witnesses will be called, refuses to answer questions by the accused and explains they can also make judgment on matters for which they have called no witnesses. Anyone who would find the breathless detail within the article on JW disciplinary procedures interesting would also find this recording interesting, informative and instructive. It's on that basis alone that I think it is a valuable and worthy external link. LTSally (talk) 11:38, 8 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Comment - As an external link it doesn't have to meet WP: Reliable sourse but still, how can this be verified? It just seems ripe for abuse. Elmmapleoakpine (talk) 01:06, 9 September 2009 (UTC)

The link is to a blog

 * Comment - the link is to a recording that happens to be hosted by a blog site; the blog's content itself isn't what the link is relied on for. Singularity42 (talk) 04:41, 6 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Comment - the link in question is actually to the blog.-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 05:16, 6 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Solution: The link is also available as a podcast on iTunes here. This obviates the need for a link to a blog. LTSally (talk) 10:01, 6 September 2009 (UTC)
 * How exactly is iTunes different from a blog? Choyoołʼįįhí:Seb az86556 11:13, 8 September 2009 (UTC)
 * A blog contains argumentation and a point of view. It is also mentioned explicitly in WP:EL as a link that is normally avoided. The iTunes audio contains just the audio and a short introductory explanation. LTSally (talk) 11:41, 8 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Then there's a different point: when I click on the link, it tells me that I need to log in as an administrator. Just like wikipedia discourages "members-only"-links (such as NYT restricted access), this cannot be included, either. Choyoołʼįįhí:Seb az86556 12:01, 8 September 2009 (UTC)

"Knowledgable source" (as required by WP:EL)

 * Comment - I'm not sure about this. Because of the lack of reliability with a lot of internet media content, I tend to like a secondary source that can at least confirm that the recording is what it claims to be. Singularity42 (talk) 04:41, 6 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Comment - It is not possible from the content to establish whether the statements therein are typical of judicial committees (though they may be).-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 05:09, 6 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Comment - An individual who has been tried by a judicial committee is very knowledgeable about the procedure, especially his own hearing, which is the subject of the audio. If, theoretically, the Witnesses allowed a hearing to be recorded and the accused posted the audio on the internet, would the issue of "knowledgeable source" be raised? I doubt it would be an issue, and the recording would be accepted at face value. There is no claim that this audio is typical of anything; it is simply an example of a hearing, which is a valuable document worthy of inclusion in an encylopedia because of the information it can impart on process. LTSally (talk) 10:19, 6 September 2009 (UTC)
 * If it's not typical of anything, it has little encyclopaedic value for the subject.-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 11:01, 6 September 2009 (UTC)


 * I am very skeptical. As noted somewhere above, I could go into some basement, take a tape-recorder, and create a "knowledgable source". Throw in a few extra-bucks, and I'll give you a video within 2 days. Until someone gives me evidence that that is not the case with this link, I would side with non-inclusion. Choyoołʼįįhí:Seb az86556 11:20, 8 September 2009 (UTC)
 * We can't judge whether the source is knowledgeable, but we do know it's not a reported by a source with a reputation for reliability. We can't use these sort of blog-posted claims as sources or ELs. Cool Hand Luke 18:57, 23 September 2009 (UTC)

Legality

 * Comment - this is not the forum to decide whether we are linking to illegal content. So far, no authority has stated the content is illegal, or more specifically, has stated that it violates U.S. or Florida state law (as per WP:NOTCENSORED. Therefore, I believe this is something left to the higher-ups to figure out, not us lowly editors. Singularity42 (talk) 04:41, 6 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Comment - It has been stated that it is a violation of California law, and it has not been stated that it is not a violation of Florida law . Something of questionable legality that has no other existing notability in reliable sources should not be endorsed by Wikipedia.-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 05:09, 6 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Comment I wouldn't worry about legality at all. Any court can only establish that a) recording something is illegal and b)posting it is illegal. No court can (in this case at least) establish that it is illegal to look at a webpage once it's posted - and that's exactly what an external link is. (By this, I do not mean to imply that there aren't other reasons why the link shouldn't be posted. Reliable source is of a much greater concern when it comes to blogs and such. I would seriously focus on that argument.) Choyoołʼįįhí:Seb az86556 11:11, 8 September 2009 (UTC)
 * It's not about whether it's illegal to use the illegal recording, but whether doing so would be seen as bringing Wikipedia into disrepute by endorsing an illegal recording.-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 11:34, 8 September 2009 (UTC)
 * That indeed is a point. I understood this as fearing legal repercussions. Reputation could indeed be an issue, but tat applies to all the points in question. Choyoołʼįįhí:Seb az86556 11:58, 8 September 2009 (UTC)

Privacy and other ethical concerns

 * Comment - I think this is really connected to the legality issue. If it's not illegal, and it's not a shock site, then as per WP:NOTCENSORED, the link should stay. Singularity42 (talk) 04:41, 6 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Comment - As above (under Legality).-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 05:09, 6 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Comment - As per Singularity. Concerns over protection of privacy would presumably be applied to protect the accused. The hearing is solely concerned with his actions. By posting the audio on the blog and iTunes he has demonstrated he has no objections to his privacy being lost. LTSally (talk) 10:23, 6 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Permission for a recorded conversation should be given by all participants, not just the accused.-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 11:01, 6 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Says who? As far as I've read, US laws very often state permission from one partecipant is required. --LjL (talk) 11:41, 6 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Says the state of Florida.-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 12:10, 6 September 2009 (UTC)
 * That's generally true. Just like no-one can use a picture where happen to be in the background w/o my permission. Choyoołʼįįhí:Seb az86556 12:04, 8 September 2009 (UTC)
 * This just seems inappropriate and an invaision of someone's privacy on some level. What if it were you.? Elmmapleoakpine (talk) 01:03, 9 September 2009 (UTC)

Original Research?

 * Comment - see my comment for the reliable source issue. WP:EL is seperate from WP:OR. Singularity42 (talk) 04:41, 6 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Comment - An audio of a court hearing is no more original research than a video of a car crash. It is simply a document of the event with no interpretation. LTSally (talk) 10:24, 6 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Comment - An audio of a court hearing has a different kind of verifiability and is part of the civic/public record.  A private recording on a blog could be anything and is suspect. Elmmapleoakpine (talk) 00:06, 18 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Comment. Seems like more of a reliability issue. Cool Hand Luke 18:52, 23 September 2009 (UTC)
 * The mood is clearly against including the link. I'm not pursuing it further, but thanks for your comment. LTSally (talk) 00:26, 18 September 2009 (UTC)

Redirect from Disfellowshipped
"Disfellowshipped" and a few variants redirect to this article. However, considering that LDS, 7DA, Christadelphians, some Pentecostals and Churches of God and a variety of minority religions also use the term "disfellowship", is it really appropriate for it to redirect to an article specifically about Jehovah's Witnesses? I suggest a Disambiguation Page. Downstrike (talk) 20:04, 16 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Where the context refers to shunning, disfellowshipped should redirect here as it is the most common use of the term in that context. Where the context refers to congregational restrictions that do not include shunning, for example as used by LDS, it should redirect to the other appropriate article. If the context is indeterminate, there is a disambiguation page, Disfellowship.-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 00:02, 17 July 2011 (UTC)

Who is mentally diseased?
"Members are told that individuals who leave the organization are "mentally diseased" and are directed not to "receive them into our homes or greet them.""

Yes, I am aware that 2 newspaper articles are cited. But the actual Watchtower magazine shows that it refers to apostates. Not all who leave the organization are apostates. Further, the context shows that "mentally diseased" is a quote from the Bible (1 Timothy 6:3, 4) and is not meant as an insult with no context. The existing sentence advances the POV that all who leave are described as mentally diseased which the Watchtower invented out of thin air. Thoughts? StandFirm-JW (talk) 20:33, 14 November 2011 (UTC)


 * The New World Translation does indeed use the term "mentally diseased", and is in fact the only English Bible translation to use that term. The Watchtower (July 15, 2011) defined apostasy as "a standing away from true worship, a falling away, defection, rebellion, abandonment" (footnote, page 15); by that reasoning, those who fall away from, or choose to defect from, that religion are apostates. The magazine then links that term with the highly offensive phrase "mentally diseased" found at 1 Tim 6, despite the fact that that passage of scripture does not explicitly refer to "apostates". In other words, the Bible doesn't make that link; the WTS creates it. Having described those who defect from the religion as apostates who are mentally diseased, the Watchtower then directs JWs to shun such individuals.


 * The WTS would probably refer to me as an apostate. I chose to leave the religion because I disagree with it and still believe it deceives followers and has many characteristics of a high-control religious cult. In voicing my distaste for the religion that stole some of the best years of my life, I am assumed to be "seeking to infect others with my disloyal teachings." Oddly, a Catholic or Baptist or Muslim who accepted JW teachings and abandoned (defected from) that religion to join the JWs would also, by definition, be an apostate, and thus mentally diseased!


 * Those who disassociate (formally resign) are certainly regarded as apostates. Since 1981 JWs have been directed to treat disassociated people as if they were disfellowshipped (ie, shun them). I'm wondering if it might then be more accurate to change the wording to say that "members are told that individuals who formally resign from the organization are "mentally diseased" .... but the problem is, the July 15 WT doesn't make that distinction. It just refers to those who abandon, fall away from, or defect from, the JW religion. So perhaps it's best left the way it is. BlackCab (talk) 10:00, 15 November 2011 (UTC)
 * It is interesting that JWs cannot see the dichotomy in that JWs are required to preach to others about what they believe to be true, but that former JWs who do not wish to be shunned and labelled 'mentally diseased' are required not to tell anyone what they believe to be true. Whatever happened to, "No one should be forced to worship in a way that he finds unacceptable or be made to choose between his beliefs and his family."?? Awake!, July 2009, page 29.-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 10:05, 15 November 2011 (UTC)
 * The context shows that mentally diseased is applied to apostate false teachers who attempt to spread their teachings which is a small minority of those who leave JWs. Regardless, the sentence is POV charged and needs changing. I propose something more neutral like, "The Watchtower states that "false teachers" who "seek to infect others with their disloyal teachings" are "mentally diseased (1 Timothy 6:3, 4);" [ref WT] some have stated that this applies to all individuals who leave the organization [ref newspapers]." StandFirm (talk) 17:35, 15 November 2011 (UTC)


 * In fact the article doesn't limit the use of the term "mentally diseased" to apostates who seek to dupe others. It says, without qualification, that apostates are "mentally diseased," and that they seek to infect others with their disloyal teachings. The article has already identified apostates as those who defect from a religion; nowhere in the article is there a "context" that refers to a small minority of defectors. Your latest edit has altered the statement so much it now has no connection with the Shunning section it's in. The point of the statement there was that the WTS directs members to shun apostates. The newspapers have correctly identified those to whom the Watchtower was referring. BlackCab (talk) 20:25, 15 November 2011 (UTC)
 * I think what the Watchtower itself said is more important than some media outlet's interpretation. Regardless you seem to have let my edit stand so I'll let this discussion go. StandFirm (talk) 22:53, 15 November 2011 (UTC)
 * It's a question of time. The wording certainly needs to change. I'll point out that your wording that "members ... are said to be violating 2 John 11" makes no sense, so you may like to alter that and save others the trouble. BlackCab (talk) 23:45, 15 November 2011 (UTC)
 * The wording on 2 John 11 is necessary to maintain NPOV showing the Watchtower's reasoning for making such a statement. I am open to suggestions on wording though. StandFirm (talk) 05:06, 16 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Andrew Holden (page 163) discusses the terms applied to defectors, or those "who do eventually break free", thus: "Not only is their disfellowshipping announced from the platform, they are also condemned as 'mentally diseased' or 'apostates'." Holden's claim is based on his own observations of congregational activity and interviews with members (in other words, separate to what the WTS says in its publications); one of those he interviewed acknowledges that once he left, he left, "his friendships would be severed and he would be regarded as an apostate." With that statement, and the observations of journalists, the "apostate" and "mentally diseased" statements clearly have a wider application than are now in the article. BlackCab (talk) 10:10, 17 November 2011 (UTC)

Insight book reference
WP:OR says clearly: "This includes any analysis or synthesis of published material that serves to advance a position not advanced by the sources. To demonstrate that you are not adding OR, you must be able to cite reliable, published sources that are directly related to the topic of the article, and directly support the material as presented. The prohibition against OR means that all material added to articles must be attributable to a reliable published source..."

This means you can cite Ray Franz as claiming such and such. You cannot cite the Insight book to advance your preferred conclusion even if Ray Franz reached it too. That is OR. StandFirm (talk) 19:46, 16 November 2011 (UTC)


 * Wrong. Franz, who is a reliable source, uses the quote from the book to support his own argument. It is an entirely valid use of the source. The section you quote from refers to editors who themselves select sections of a source to synthesize an argument. BlackCab (talk) 20:31, 16 November 2011 (UTC)


 * It is not for Wikipedia to draw conclusions not meant by the source. It can only report others' conclusions and their reasons. But it cannot argue itself. StandFirm (talk) 00:04, 17 November 2011 (UTC)


 * And nor does it. Franz himself makes the point and cites that passage from the Insight book to back it up. BlackCab (talk) 04:22, 17 November 2011 (UTC)


 * Franz cites it, not Wikipedia. Wikipedia is not the place to prove something. WP:SYNTH. If Franz claims it then cite him only. StandFirm (talk) 05:09, 17 November 2011 (UTC)


 * The more verifiability an encyclopedia can offer, the better. Franz makes a statement that the WTS is hypocritical, then supports that statement by quoting from a Watch Tower source, highlighting the contrast between what the WTS says and what it does. As a point of criticism contained in the article, it is helpful and valuable to include both his claim and the WTS statement (which he cites) that is at the core of his criticism. There is nothing inappropriate about its use here. BlackCab (talk) 05:23, 17 November 2011 (UTC)


 * My bad - I just noticed you moved the Insight book reference from the main body to the reference itself. This makes more sense as it show Franz is arguing such and such, not the article. I didn't notice this until just now. StandFirm (talk) 22:29, 17 November 2011 (UTC)


 * Glad we cleared that up. Now I think you have some work to do at the Eschatology article. BlackCab (talk) 11:20, 18 November 2011 (UTC)

Who is mentally diseased? Redux
The version I preferred read: The Watchtower states that "false teachers" who "seek to infect others with their disloyal teachings" are "mentally diseased (1 Timothy 6:3, 4 [NWT])"; some have stated that this applies to all individuals who leave the organization.

BlackCab changed this to: Those who choose to defect are commonly labelled as "mentally diseased" apostates for what The Watchtower says are their efforts to "infect others with their disloyal teachings".

His edit summary said: Rewrite to harmonise WT statements with newspaper interpretation of treatment of defectors

The problem here is that WP:JW clearly says (emphasis added): Contradictions - Editors should not attempt to reconcile contradictory statements in JW publications, as this is original research. Simply state both statements, and allow the reader to determine how to reconcile them.

If an editor should not attempt to harmonize or reconcile 'contradictions' within Watchtower publications then how much more so they shouldn't try to do so between a Watchtower publication and a newspaper! This is why I believe the former version is better overall. Further the newspaper is clearly relying mainly on what ex-JWs say (i.e. biased) so they can't expect to have the same weight as what the Watchtower clearly says. See WP:RS about what self-published sources say about themselves. StandFirm (talk) 23:52, 21 November 2011 (UTC)


 * My edit is accurate; yours attempts to skirt around the issue and avoid stating the obvious. Your edit also wrongly claims that the news reports says all those who "leave" the organization are called false teachers. Who are the "false teachers" your edit refer to? The answer, as stated in the WT article, is "apostates". "False teachers" are not those of other denominations teaching doctrines that conflict with the WTS doctrines. What, then, is an apostate? The WT article says they are those who defect from "true worship", which is code wording for "the JW religion". The word "defect" used in my edit unmistakably refers to those who make a definite decision to leave the religion. My edit covers what the newspapers (a secondary source) say, and also encompasses what the Watchtower (a primary source) says about the mental condition of those who are accused of trying to influence existing members with "disloyal teachings". BlackCab (talk) 06:42, 22 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Standfirm's chosen wording uses selective quoting to suggest a subset of 'apostates', which is not what the article says. I have therefore restored the actual quote from the source: apostates are “mentally diseased,” and they seek to infect others with their disloyal teachings.-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 08:03, 22 November 2011 (UTC)

Citation needed?
Where is the source for these sentences?

"Jehovah's Witnesses have no provision for normal association with conscientious objectors who choose to leave. The only way to officially leave the religion is to disassociate or be disfellowshipped, and both entail the same set of prohibitions and penalties." StandFirm (talk) 02:46, 24 November 2011 (UTC)

Additionally, the article needs to make clear whom shunning may apply to by stating something to the effect that judicial sanctions may not be applied if the person has been inactive. I had a sentence like that but it was removed. However, most people would consider someone to have left a religion if they are not active in it at all (say the Catholic Church) even if they are on the official rolls somewhere. Where do you think this sentence should be placed if not under 'criticism'? StandFirm (talk) 06:02, 24 November 2011 (UTC)
 * WP:V requires that a source be cited for "anything challenged or likely to be challenged". What part of those two sentences are you challenging? Are you suggesting there is another method of "officially leaving" the religion that does not entail shunning? The claim that sanctions "may not" or "need not" be applied to someone who has not associated for some time is something that has already been discussed. There is no support for the inclusion of such a statement. BlackCab (talk) 06:59, 24 November 2011 (UTC)
 * The relevant source (viz, the elders' manual) does not say that sanctions do not apply to inactive members. It says that matters may be 'held in abeyance' (i.e. sanctions might not applied immediately) if the person is not associating with JWs (though the source adds that in such circumstances, the person's JW family members would still "curtail family association severely"). It is therefore redundant to assert that individuals who have no contact with JWs are not shunned by JWs. If an 'inactive' JW who associates with other JWs were to do something the Watch Tower Society considers to be a 'serious sin', then that person would then be shunned, regardless of their period of 'inactivity' as a JW.-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 08:01, 24 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Are you denying that it falsely implies that you cannot cease activity in JWs without DF or DA? StandFirm (talk) 22:27, 24 November 2011 (UTC)
 * "denying that it falsely implies"?
 * Your antagonistic phrasing aside, I am stating that the article quite clearly indicates that those who "formally leave" and "officially resign" are shunned. Further, I am stating that inactive members may be subjected to sanctions if they are considered to have committed as 'serious sin'. Additionally, I am stating that inactive members who are not associating might not be officially shunned immediately (because there is no contact anyway), but that their family might still "curtail family association severely".
 * Why are you so intent on removing a secondary source? Have you even read it??-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 22:48, 24 November 2011 (UTC)
 * StandFirm, a few points: the source you cite makes no mention of "counseling" JWs who ignore the injunction to shun disfellowshipped individuals. Shunning is a direction, not a "guideline". There is no such thing as violating a Bible scripture. It is also obstructive editing to delete a source (a book published by the University of Toronto Press) on the basis that you think it is "biased".
 * In answer to your question about the implications of the article: te section now clearly refers to sanctions applied against those who officially leave the religion. There is no mention of sanctions against those who fade away, but nor is that notable: I know of no religions that apply sanctions against people that fade away, though this is common in religious cults. BlackCab (talk) 22:38, 24 November 2011 (UTC)
 * BlackCab, you are right, "there is no mention of sanctions against those who fade away." But readers not familiar with this subject will not realize that one can fade away without DF or DA sanctions and can thus have contact with JW family and so on. Thus the article needs to mention that possibility by saying something like, "Elders are instructed that baptized persons who have ceased activity in the congregation for some time need not be disfellowshipped or considered disassociated." No matter what form the sentence takes the article needs to mention the 'fade away' option in some way. StandFirm (talk) 03:44, 25 November 2011 (UTC)
 * What source do you propose, or is that based on personal knowledge? In any case, it is not entirely accurate, because as Jeffro has pointed out, a person who tiptoed out of the religion to avoid being shunned could in a year or two or five be summoned before a judicial committee for some perceived breach: displaying Christmas decorations, for example, or displaying photos of their child's birthday party on a Facebook page. You claim elders may choose to ignore such a person, but I know of cases where exactly that has happened. The threat of being shunned is something that keeps many ex-JWs quiet, which is exactly what the organisation wants. So even if was true that elders are "instructed" to let people go if they want to go quietly, writing a sentence such as you propose would be telling only half the story. BlackCab (talk) 03:59, 25 November 2011 (UTC)
 * The source for StandFirm's claim that "Elders are instructed that baptized persons who have ceased activity in the congregation for some time need not be disfellowshipped or considered disassociated" is being taken out of context. Specifically, the information on page 73 of Shepherd the Flock of God, in the chapter "Determining Whether a Judicial Committee Should Be Formed", isn't about the treatment of 'inactive' JWs in general. It is about deciding whether to form a judicial committee in the event that a JW who has "Not Associated for Many Years" is considered to have committed a 'serious sin'. The article quite clearly indicates that shunning applies to those who have 1) been disfellowshipped, or 2) disassociated (which includes the elders deciding a person has disassociated by their actions, such as by celebrating Christmas or accepting a blood transfusion). Just as there is little chance that readers would assume lay members of any other religion would be shunned by other members of that religion, it is unlikely readers would conclude that 'inactive' but believing JWs (that is, lay members) would be shunned (though in practice association with inactive JWs is often limited).-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 08:35, 25 November 2011 (UTC)
 * (In essence, JWs have a tertiary clergy/laity class system, with only semantic differences from other churches. 1) elders and ministerial servants ('clergy', i.e. bishops and deacons) can and do claim ecclesiastical privilege; 2) publishers ('lay ministers') cannot claim ecclesiastical privilege, but maintain a ministry; 3) inactive ('laity') do not maintain a ministry but hold to JW belief. Beyond that are non-JWs [including unbaptized family members and bible students] and people who are shunned.)-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 08:42, 25 November 2011 (UTC)
 * BlackCab says: "You claim elders may choose to ignore such a person, but I know of cases where exactly that has happened....So even if was true that elders are "instructed" to let people go if they want to go quietly, writing a sentence such as you propose would be telling only half the story."
 * The difference is that I have a reliable source for my statement.
 * Jeffro77 says: "The article quite clearly indicates that shunning applies to those who have 1) been disfellowshipped, or 2) disassociated...it is unlikely readers would conclude that 'inactive' but believing JWs (that is, lay members) would be shunned"
 * On the contrary, the article nowhere mentions the possibility of a JW being neither DFed nor DAed but inactive and not shunned. Since that possibility is nowhere mentioned readers are very likely to conclude that all JWs who cease activity are shunned, especially since the criticism section includes that very claim. StandFirm (talk) 00:38, 26 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Individuals who identify as JWs, and have not disassociated or been disfellowshipped, are simply lay members. Do articles about other religions need to specify that lay members are not shunned? JWs, whether 'active' or 'inactive' are shunned if they are considered to have done something the Watch Tower Society considers a 'serious sin', and the article accurately conveys that.-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 00:54, 26 November 2011 (UTC)


 * The Criticisms section clearly, unambiguously, states that "The only way to officially leave Jehovah's Witnesses is to disassociate or be disfellowshipped, and both entail the same set of prohibitions and penalties, with no provision for continued normal association." It makes no reference to sanctions against a member who becomes inactive. Seriously, the amount of detail this article already contains about the disciplinary processes of a religion, spelling out the minutiae of discipline and corrections, suggests a weird fascination for control and punishment. Anyone would think it's a military organisation. BlackCab (talk) 00:52, 26 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Jeffro77, this is the very first time that I have seen that 'inactive as lay members' theory, so I doubt that any reader would reach that conclusion. But even if it were true, the article still does not make clear that such persons, whatever you call them, are not the same as DFed or DAed.
 * BlackCab, yes, no reference is made to a lack of sanctions against the inactive, and therefore readers will have no knowledge of it. Why not? StandFirm (talk) 03:42, 26 November 2011 (UTC)
 * It's not a 'theory'. It's basic semantics. 'Inactive' is merely JW jargon for JWs who haven't reported preaching activity (specifically, for more than 6 months). There is nothing in the article to suggest that 'inactive' JWs are shunned, and there is no reason to conclude from the article, or any of the JW Project articles, that they would be.-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 03:47, 26 November 2011 (UTC)
 * I'm not aware of any notable claims that 'inactive' JWs are shunned. Nor are there any JW sources defending such a claim (the 'elders' manual' was misused as source, but it actually discusses judicial action that might be taken against long-time inactive members who later do something considered to be a 'serious sin'). It is unnecessary to state that 'inactive' JWs are not shunned, because it is a strawman argument.-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 03:55, 26 November 2011 (UTC)
 * The article leaves the impression that one cannot cease activity in JWs without being shunned.
 * You admit that one can.
 * Therefore, it should be made clear as it is verifiable. StandFirm (talk) 05:27, 26 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Which part of the article leaves that impression? The statements about shunning are quite clear.-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 05:40, 26 November 2011 (UTC)
 * The article provides information about JW shunning in a section called Discipline involving "serious sin", which first lists the things that are considered serious sins, which does not include being inactive. There is no ambiguity.-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 05:46, 26 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Most readers will not know about the state we call 'inactive'. Therefore they will not know that that option exists for JWs. Thus the article misrepresents the options open to JWs. StandFirm (talk) 00:01, 27 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Readers will also know that religions generally have many non-practising members who still believe the religion to be true and consider themselves to be members. The specific semantics are irrelevant.-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 01:57, 27 November 2011 (UTC)
 * But do JWs shun those ones? The article makes it seem all non-practicing members are shunned. StandFirm (talk) 04:15, 27 November 2011 (UTC)
 * The article does not state or imply that that is the case, even though in practice it often happens to varying degrees.-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 06:37, 27 November 2011 (UTC)

Comment: There is no reliable source offered in support of the statement "Elders are instructed that baptized persons who have ceased activity in the congregation for some time need not be disfellowshipped or considered disassociated." See diff: http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Talk:Criticism_of_Jehovah%27s_Witnesses&diff=prev&oldid=461947170 --Marvin Shilmer (talk) 23:55, 27 November 2011 (UTC)
 * The source is the elders' book. Shepherd the Flock of God, page 73 and Pay Attention to Yourselves and to All the Flock, pages 99-100. Also see WP:ABOUTSELF.
 * Jeffro77, the article does imply that is the case. The article states "The only way to officially leave Jehovah's Witnesses is to disassociate or be disfellowshipped, and both entail the same set of prohibitions and penalties, with no provision for continued normal association. Sociologist Andrew Holden has claimed that fear of family break-up or loss causes people who might otherwise freely leave the religion to remain members."
 * This criticism implies that people are forced to stay Jehovah's Witnesses (which implies activity in the religion) to avoid being shunned. To keep NPOV the article needs to state that inactivity does not mean automatic shunning. StandFirm (talk) 02:43, 28 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Your arguments are becoming tedious. The sources you cite make no such claim, and this has been pointed out to you several times. You have made your point repeatedly about what you claim the article implies, but no one has agreed with you. There seems little point in repeating the statement when the consensus is clearly against you. BlackCab (talk) 06:39, 28 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Comment: The criticism at issue is unrelated to inactivity. The criticism at issue is related to officially leaving. This particular criticism arises because individuals find themselves unable to openly remove themselves from the religion’s structure without facing harsh communal shunning that goes so far to defy natural affection between family members to associate openly, unreservedly and spontaneously. The fact that it may be possible to avoid this communal shunning by “fading” only underscores the point of criticism. In effect, those who “fade” in an attempt to avoid this organized communal shunning are engaging a tactic to avoid the very point of criticism: the religion’s structured response to officially leaving.---Marvin Shilmer (talk) 13:39, 28 November 2011 (UTC)
 * RfC is below. StandFirm (talk) 23:54, 28 November 2011 (UTC)

Does article need to mention inactive JWs?
All here agree that Jehovah's Witnesses are not shunned just for becoming inactive in the religion. The issue is, Does the article leave a previously unfamiliar reader with the impression that JWs cannot cease activity in the religion without shunning, so that therefore the position of the 'inactive' needs to be mentioned? 23:58, 28 November 2011 (UTC)

Example - the article states "The only way to officially leave Jehovah's Witnesses is to disassociate or be disfellowshipped, and both entail the same set of prohibitions and penalties, with no provision for continued normal association. Sociologist Andrew Holden has claimed that fear of family break-up or loss causes people who might otherwise freely leave the religion to remain members."

This criticism implies that people are forced to stay Jehovah's Witnesses (which implies activity in the religion) to avoid being shunned. To keep NPOV the article needs to state that inactivity does not mean automatic shunning. StandFirm (talk) 02:12, 29 November 2011 (UTC)


 * No need: I've read the article carefully and have concluded that it does not leave the reader with the impression that JWs cannot cease activity in the religion without shunning. The conditions for shunning are well spelt out. There is no need to clarify what "inactive" means in the context of shunning. Dominus Vobisdu (talk) 00:48, 29 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Why not: I haven't read the article carefully, but I've skimmed it. It seems the word "inactive" only appears once, under Judicial abeyance. I don't see any particular reason not to clarify that people can "unofficially" leave as well in the paragraph StandFirm mentioned above. – Adjwilley (talk) 03:35, 29 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Inactivity in churches in general (i.e. failing to attend services) does not usually involve shunning. The fact that inactive JWs are not shunned is therefore not notable. What is notable is the shunning of those who officially leave, and this is quite clearly stated in the article.-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 10:47, 2 December 2011 (UTC)


 * No need: StandFirm-JW seems to be motivated by a desire to somehow cast doubt on the words of the study by Holden, the sociologist. Holden was clearly indicating that some members of the religion who in any other circumstance would simply leave a religion they have grown to dislike are compelled to remain out of fear of being shunned as an ex-member. StandFirm has repeatedly misused a source from a JW elders' handbook to wrongly claim that elders are told they "need not" direct that a member who is no longer active (but who has not formally left, through written or verbal announcement) be shunned. He wishes to state that anyone who ceases active membership but has declined to formally diassociate need not be shunned. Is it notable that a religion does not take punitive action against someone who ceases active membership? I'd say no. Is it notable that a religion reserves the perpetual right to take punitive action against such a person? I'd say so. That is what the existing statement, appropriately contained n the Criticisms section, states. BlackCab (talk) 11:36, 29 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Comment: BlackCab says: "StandFirm has repeatedly misused a source" Just to clarify I have not engaged in any edit warring. "Holden was clearly indicating that some members of the religion who in any other circumstance would simply leave a religion they have grown to dislike are compelled to remain out of fear of being shunned as an ex-member....Is it notable that a religion does not take punitive action against someone who ceases active membership? I'd say no." I argue the opposite: It is noteworthy and necessary for NPOV that the religion does not take punitive action against someone who ceases activity because a critical study claims they are compelled to remain out of fear of being shunned. StandFirm (talk) 17:40, 29 November 2011 (UTC)


 * No need: The article does not leave unfamiliar readers with an impression that JWs cannot cease activity in the religion without shunning. The article leads unfamiliar readers to the well supported conclusion that JWs find themselves unable to openly remove themselves from the religion’s structure without facing harsh communal shunning that goes so far to defy natural affection between family members to associate openly, unreservedly and spontaneously. The fact that it may be possible to avoid this communal shunning by tactically ceasing attendance and reporting ministerial time (known colloquially as “fading”) only underscores the particular point of criticism at issue. In effect, those who “fade” in an attempt to avoid this organized communal shunning are engaging a tactic to avoid the very point of criticism: the religion’s structured response to officially leaving. Those who “officially leave” find themselves subject to the religion’s organized communal shunning program that enforces even close adult family members to stop association with the individual except for absolutely necessary family business. This reaction by the religion is what readers are unfamiliar with, and is why it is part of the article. On the other hand, no reader is surprised to learn that a person of any religion can choose to simply stay at home and cease attending meetings at some church.--Marvin Shilmer (talk) 13:25, 29 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Comment: Marvin Shilmer admits that "fading" (i.e. becoming inactive) is a way used to de facto cease being a JW that does not involve shunning like other methods; yet for some reason he opposes mentioning this particular method in the article. Why? I argue that mentioning only the other methods creates an admittedly false POV that you cannot cease being a JW without shunning.
 * Additionally, I would just like to add that BlackCab and Marvin Shilmer have been previously involved in this discussion so theses responses need not discourage more RfC commenters. StandFirm (talk) 17:40, 29 November 2011 (UTC)


 * No need: I've never been a JW, and therefore have no dog in this fight; however, as no stranger to a restrictive organized religion I agree with BlackCab and Marvin Shilmer that it is notable for even the possibility of shunning to exist for people leaving a religious group. For StandFirm to assert that leaving does not automatically trigger shunning (apparently, if the leaving is done very cautiously) underscores—as it should—the fact that a policy of shunning exists.Miniapolis (talk) 03:34, 30 November 2011 (UTC)
 * No need - There is no clear statement which would lead those not familiar with the subject to automatically assume inactivity would lead to shunning. The response regarding "fading" above might be relevant, but it would need to be sourced and even then there is, so far as I can see, no clear indication how long one would have to be inactive to qualify under such. If there is some sort of sourced statement to the effect that "being inactive for (x specific time) is counted in at least some cases as being 'leaving' the JWs," such a statement could certainly be included. However, that is another matter entirely. John Carter (talk) 00:13, 28 December 2011 (UTC)

I closed this seemingly-resolved RfC today. -- AuthorityTam  talk…contrib 18:46, 13 August 2012 (UTC)

Review
I have read this article, and I think that it's nicely formatted and written, as well as faithful to my knowledge of the WT. I thank those who contributed to it. There are three points which I noticed which could perhaps be improved or researched. I will not personally alter the article about these unless requested to, as I think it's already in a very good state, but these may be considered suggestions for possible minor changes:


 * The article states that when a member is announced as no longer being a JW, the policy is that no detail is given (reguarding dissassociation or disfellowshipping). This may possibly reflect current policy, but I personally witnessed cases where disassociation was specifically mentioned during some announcements.


 * Another similar irregularity has to do with the announcements for reproof, where apparently a public announcement should only be made when most of the congregation is already aware of the member's "serious sin". I have witnessed reproof announcements which surprised most of the audience.

It's however possible that in the case of both types of above-mentioned announcements these irregularities could have been the result of misjudgement on the part of an elder.


 * On the previous talk page section about mentioning inactive members: I think that the "Critical view" section properly notes the issue about the only two ways to leave the organization resulting in shunning. Because of that very problem, however, there also exist a number of "inactive" members who neither were disfellowshipped nor will disassociate officially, but will remain inactive in the long term, to avoid the serious repercusions of shunning.  These remain friendly to their active family members and friends as possible, but no longer regularily attend meetings or preaching, and at their discretion live their lives as they can.  They therefore might warrant a mention here.  Oh, and perhaps that the "Critical views" section could link to the main "Criticism of the Jehovah's Witnesses" article.

Thank you very much, 76.10.128.192 (talk) 02:11, 30 April 2013 (UTC)
 * Something like twenty or thirty years ago, JW 'elders' previously used to make slightly different announcing about individuals as either 'disfellowshipped' or 'disassociated'. The procedure changed such that they simply state that "[name] is no longer one of Jehovah's Witnesses" in either situation. There are two likely reasons for the change: 1) legal reasons relating to potential defamation suits; 2) obscuring the number who leave due to doctrinal disputes ('disassociating') as opposed to 'immorality'. I don't think the former practice is of sufficient notability to mention in the article. If such announcements have been made much more recently, they aren't consistent with official procedure, and so would not be worthy of mention in the article. The same would apply to the point about 'reproof'.
 * It is unremarkable that some JWs are merely 'lay members' ('inactive') but have not formally left the religion. This is analogous to non-practicing members of any other religion, even though they are still nominally members of the religion. It therefore is not notable that such individuals are not shunned (though in practice, 'inactive' JWs are often not included in social activities by other JWs anyway).-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 06:53, 30 April 2013 (UTC)

Shunning section
I have refactored the Shunning section (previously Disfellowshipping) to remove redundant material that applies to both disfellowshipping and disassociation. I have also moved statements about apostasy to the section about so-called 'serious sins'.

There is currently a statement about reinstatement rates that should be updated if possible. The reinstatement rate from forty years is almost certainly no longer relevant and is of limited value. If there isn't a more recent source providing more current rates for reinstatement, the statement can probably be deleted.-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 05:35, 16 November 2014 (UTC)

This addition
https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Jehovah%27s_Witnesses_and_congregational_discipline&oldid=663973547

Like at the Shunning page, this seems to me to be too POV'y. Thoughts? Vyselink (talk) 17:53, 25 May 2015 (UTC)

'Disagreement of thought'
I have removed the final sentence of the critical view section as it is essentially meaningless. The fact that Watch Tower Society publications indicate that a thought on its own isn't grounds for 'disfellowshipping' is unhelpful and misleading, since it is obvious that one would need to express that thought to someone else for others to know about it, and that expression may constitute the 'action' which could be grounds for disfellowshipping. The sentence should not be restored to the article unless it is qualified with the fact that expressing the thought to others would be considered such an 'action'.-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 03:53, 28 January 2017 (UTC)

Reprove
User:Jeffro77 reproof (reprove #2) and Rebuke And Reproof seems to fit the context to me. I will leave for others. There is a related discussion on the recreation of a dab which relies on this term as a WP:DABMENTION at Redirects_for_discussion/Log/2018_March_19. Widefox ; talk 21:36, 19 March 2018 (UTC)
 * It fits the general definition in the sense that any word fits the definition of how a word is generally used when it is used in that way. A link to Wiktionary is unnecessary as the more specific usage by JWs is already provided in the sentence, and the JW usage is more specific than the 'dictionary definition'. If you are not aware of how this term is used with a specific meaning among Jehovah's Witnesses, you should probably leave it alone.-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 21:42, 19 March 2018 (UTC)
 * If you're not aware even after I've pointed out that Rebuke And Reproof is Church of England, so clearly not specific to Jehovah's Witnesses, then maybe both of us should?! Widefox ; talk 21:54, 19 March 2018 (UTC)
 * See also Talk:Reproof Rebuke and reproof (Judaism), and reprimand.
 * Logically, if Rebuke is a notable CofE topic, then "reproof" (Jehovah's Witnesses) may be a valid encyclopaedic subtopic too (I don't know). Rebuke is a weak stub. It could be argued that they could/should be combined into a WP:DABCONCEPT. Either way I suppose as long as there's different content in different places a dab should assist readers in navigation. Widefox ; talk 21:58, 19 March 2018 (UTC)
 * Your edit at this article to which I objected was the redundant wiktionary link. Anything related to the Church of England is out of scope of discussion about your changes to this article. JW usage of reproof is discipline applied to non-clergy 'rank-and-file' members and is not at all analogous to usage by the Church of England; the (former) Church of Scotland usage is roughly analogous. However, you seem to have misconstrued my point that the JW usage of the term is more specific than the dictionary definition as a separate claim that the practice is unique to Jehovah's Witnesses. It is indeed suitable for a dab page for reproof to include a link to this article.-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 04:59, 20 March 2018 (UTC)
 * Maybe. My point being that reproof isn't specific to JW, which is pertinent here and the dab. I have no opinion or knowledge of these specialties and specifics, but we shouldn't give the false impression it is specific or solely JW when it has a long history in Christianity aligned with general use of the word. I'm not convinced this is anything more than usage of the word in many religions. As for location of discussion, quite correct - this was the safe location for discussing while the dab was being considered for deletion, and testing out the definition here. Now the dab's existence is not in question, the correct location is of course Talk:Reproof where the wikt links make wikt linking in these articles less useful, and correctly linking to other uses of the ambiguous term is improved. Regards Widefox ; talk 15:00, 21 March 2018 (UTC)
 * The JW application of reproof is not the same as in the CoE, and the CoE uses the term rebuke. Your inclusion of the redirect of rebuke and reproof at the dab page is also incorrect. That redirect points to rebuke, which is the broader church usage. It has (again) been moved to the See also section of the dab, as neither the actual article title nor the article use the term reproof.-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 21:30, 21 March 2018 (UTC)

Serious sin: Voting
I believe that the source cited refers to choosing a candidate when voting. I know it's not much, but I know a couple who for a time lived in France and they say that the law obligated them to go voting, but they made the buletin invalid or left it blank, not choosing a candidate. It should be changed to "choosing a candidate when voting". I will do some research and produce references for this. (Sinclair 98 luis (talk) 16:56, 19 July 2018 (UTC))
 * Leaving it blank likely amounts to what is commonly called conscientious objection, in case that could help when searching. But if so, they're still not voting then (but oblige to be present if necessary).  — Paleo  Neonate  – 17:02, 19 July 2018 (UTC)
 * I think that leaving "voting in political elections" is vague and misleading. The same principal is applied to school elections to which I always attended. I just didn't vote for anyone. Yes, I'm a JW. I don't want to start a discussion about it, just improve the article, so it won't be misleading, false or biased. So far, so good in most info in Wikipedia. (Sinclair 98 luis (talk) 18:37, 19 July 2018 (UTC))
 * Improvement is always possible, indeed. More context could be added (i.e. to avoid involvement with worldly government), or alternatively, simplification: "voting" instead of "voting in political elections", although maybe that's too general...  In either case, we should also support it using a relevant source (if the existing source doesn't reflect the new wording).  It's nice to know from a JW that the article is decent, by the way (we're used to pro-JW and anti-JW WP:POV pushing on related articles, as you will understand).  — Paleo  Neonate  – 19:44, 19 July 2018 (UTC)


 * The suggested wording is not an improvement as it is redundant. 'Attending a polling booth' is not 'voting'; voting is the selection of a candidate. Voting is officially considered by JWs as a 'violation of neutrality'. Obviously if a JW actually voted but didn't tell anyone there wouldn't be a 'judicial committee', but if it became evident that a JW voted, perhaps by the person expressing their political stance to other JWs, it would be treated as a 'serious sin'.-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 23:04, 19 July 2018 (UTC)


 * It would not be suitable to remove "in political elections" as JWs are allowed to vote on other matters, such as passing 'resolutions' about use of congregation funds. The JW stance on voting in schools is that it is "to familiarize young persons with the machinery of worldly politics", and that is why it is also not permitted by them.-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 23:06, 19 July 2018 (UTC)

Suicides and depression
I have not found a section on suicides or depression related to (I avoid the term: "due to") being ejected from JW or banned. See e.g. here: https://eu.freep.com/story/news/local/michigan/2018/03/18/jehovahs-witnesses-murder-suicide-keego-harbor/409695002/

It is internationally significant, also as some countries baned JW for that reason. -》Let us introduce such section unless there was an RFC about it. Zezen (talk) 08:43, 10 December 2018 (UTC)

Recent changes
, and subsequently, an anonymous IP account, have recently sought to add material the to lead that is emotionally motivated and misleading. The most recent of these edits incorrectly claimed that "apostacy" [sic] is the "most serious" sin for JWs, which has no source, and is not supported by any JW literature. The edit also categorically asserted that family members are shunned, which is misleading because this does not include family members in the same household. The actual 'rules' regarding shunning family members are outlined in the article body, and elaboration about these details is not necessary in the lead. The changes have therefore been reverted.-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 03:01, 9 October 2022 (UTC)

RfC
I don't think I've ever started an RfC before, but I'm trying because I think this is important. I'm starting this because I think that it'd be useful when there's only 6 people (including me) that are considered "active" (as in, editing anything JW-related in the past two years) by the WikiProject. Jeffro77 cares a lot about Jehovah's Witnesses-related articles and I'm not discounting that, but I think further eyes might help on a subject matter like this. A lot of this hasn't really taken place on this talk page but there's some context at Jeffro77's talk page. Now on to the purpose of this RfC: I get that the edits from the new editor,, aren't ideal, but I do think they could potentially be lead in the right direction and that their argument that the article is misleading as-is and relies on primary sources has some merit. I think a broader consensus that isn't like three or four people might be useful. Clover moss (talk) 20:46, 13 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Are primary sources reliable in this matter? I would argue, no, and that the situation is similar, but not exactly the same, as to what is described at Disconnection (Scientology). Here's one reason why I don't think relying on primary sources like Shepherd the Flock of God, a handbook for elders, is the best idea
 * Is it relevant to include information about being shunned by family members? I would say yes, it is important to clarify that it's not simply the congregation that shuns you. I don't nessecarily agee with this: Yes, there's nuance, but I think the article as-is is misleading in itself.  These are just some of the many sources that could be used here, but here's a quote from the last one: "There are typically two routes of leaving the JW: (1) disfellowship (forced exit), the result of contravening religious rules, and (2) leaving the group voluntarily (known as disassociation or fading). Regardless of the exit route, former members often report being mandatorily shunned by their family and friends who remain in the faith".


 * Reading the article over again, I wouldn't say it's completely misleading, but that there is a reliance on primary sources like Watchtower publications. I am concerned about potential undue weight and I'm seeking broader consensus about whether changes are nessecary. Clover moss  (talk) 23:03, 13 October 2022 (UTC)


 * My statement about it not being necessary to include nuances about who is shunned was in reference to GiaHova's specific edits to a specific sentence in the lead. It is not at all the case that I suggested it should not be included in the article (and it already is indicated in the article), nor even anywhere else in the lead. Obviously the tone of GiaHova's initial edits does not belong in the article at all though.-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 08:56, 14 October 2022 (UTC)


 * It is obvious that there are not adequate secondary sources at this article. As to the matter of whether the primary sources are reliable, they are suitable for stating what JWs (more specifically, the Watch Tower Society) say are the JW policies. The lack of secondary sources certainly can give the appearance that discussion of the procedures is one-sided though, despite the fact that the article does already indicate the shunning of family members from Watch Tower Society sources.


 * The extended quotes in the Legality section should probably also be reduced, as too much seems to be made of the fact that secular countries tend to allow a great degree of latitude about how private individuals practice their religious beliefs, even where those practices may be harmful. The section is not well balanced between the idea that members are free to shun whoever they (don't) like, as distinct from the fact that JWs are told (by the Watch Tower Society) they must shun former members.-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 09:08, 14 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Thanks for that clarification. I'm sorry if I misrepresented your argument here. In regards to GiaHova's contributions isn't the worst first edit I've seen. I'm trying to encourage a newbie and provide constructive advice. Maybe my optimism is unfounded, but I wanted to give it a try. The phrasing could definitely be better (removing words like "severe") but I think a clarification on what is meant by shunning and who it affects would be useful. In regards to this edit  the verbally agreeing part seems more like it was a personal ancedote but if reliable sources mention the reinstatement process and how long it takes (it's not simply a matter of "I sinned, I'm sorry" and you're back), I can see that being useful to mention in the lead, too.
 * I see you wrote an additional comment since I started writing this one (I saw it when I previewed, glad I didn't edit conflict at least). It seems like we don't nessecarily fundamentally disagree with each other, which gives me some confidence. I agree on your perspective on the extended quotes in the legality section. I'm still uncomfortable with the reliance on what Watchtower publications say happens. I think GiaHova made an interesting point about how the organization can whitewash things and reliable sources bring that up, too. Clover moss  (talk) 09:23, 14 October 2022 (UTC)


 * The editor's first edit wasn't their worst (and far from the worst I've ever seen) but also wasn't great. It repeated information in the first paragraph that is already covered in the second, with significant tone issues, and misrepresented the application of shunning family members by simplification.


 * The lead does already state that reinstatement is only "after an extended period ", which seems fairly clear that it isn't a matter of 'just saying sorry'.


 * I have added to the lead that the shunning of family members is usually the particular focus of criticism of the practice.


 * If you have secondary sources to add for any part of the article, they would be most welcome.-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 09:42, 14 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Thanks for bringing up the "extended period" part. I somehow missed that part when looking at the diffs. It was intended as a "what could stay if improved" but I see your point about that information already being there. Clover moss  (talk) 10:05, 14 October 2022 (UTC)
 * An example of what I mean is that in the serious sins section, child abuse is definitively listed as something you're disfellowshipped for when the organization has protected pedophiles with the 'two witness rule'. Without the context of sources like this, I think that's misleading. The "normal family ties" as cited by the publications are misleading . That source clarifies a medical ethics concern about the blood policy. It's one thing to know that people are shunned for accepting a blood tranfusion, another to have the Hospital Liason Commitee be partnered with your hospital and remind you of the consquences of accepting blood as it's happening. Minors can and do get shunned, even if there's some nuance there.   Clover moss  (talk) 09:56, 14 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Another example of what I mean is that by my count, only 7 of the 137 references in this article are independant of the organization's publications. Most of these independant sources are in the legality section, so I'd say the article gives a false balance to primary sources. Clover moss  (talk) 10:22, 14 October 2022 (UTC):


 * The 'list of sins' indicates actions that would result in a 'judicial committee' rather than automatic 'disfellowshipping'. Secondary sources could be added for individual items in the 'list of serious sins' but the bulleted list itself would not be a suitable place to elaborate on how 'adequately' each of the 'serious sins' are handled; it might be suitable for additional information in that section supported by other sources though. There is already a quite detailed article about Jehovah's Witnesses' handling of child sex abuse, and I don't think it would be suitable for this article to try to replicate the purpose of that article. Similarly, Jehovah's Witnesses and blood transfusions has an entire section about coercion including the function of HLCs, which is not the purpose of this article. There should probably be some 'see also' links to those and possibly other articles in the section about 'serious sins'? As already stated, information from secondary sources should certainly be added, and this could included news reports about specific cases; however, it would not be appropriate to present individual cases (e.g. a report about a particular being minor shunned) as typical, which would require a stronger source (e.g. discussion of the practice in a book or journal).-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 10:31, 14 October 2022 (UTC)
 * I wouldn't say that the articles needs to replicate the purpose of those articles, but I do think it's relevant to summarize information revelant to the disfellowshipping practice. I think it's important to clarify the context and that the rules aren't always applied the way it's indicated officially. It might be worthwhile to have a sentence or something about domestic abuse situations since this source mentions it.
 * As for the list of serious sins and everything, I think the broader focus of the article should be summarizing what reliable sources say about this JW practice with supplemental details from the organization's policies, not summarizing the organization's literature about the practice with supplemental details from sources independant of JW publications? That's why I'm concerned about undue weight. It seems like a false balance to me, although maybe I'm wrong on this.
 * As for the difference between disfellowship/disassociating/fading, it seems like there some changes made in 2015 about shunning inactive people too? See page 45 of this source Upon further reflection, I'm not sure if this source could be used as it is a Master's thesis and I'm not sure about the wider scholarly impact. It is 100+ pages about the disfellowshipping practice though, so it might be useful as an external link in a futher reading section?
 * I agree that the source I used there for minors being shunned is one case and it isn't enough to make a broad statement about anything. My argument was more that things can deviate and I don't think JW publications are the most reliable as the overwhelming majority of sources used in the article. Clover moss  (talk) 11:13, 14 October 2022 (UTC), edited 12:36, 14 October 2022 (UTC)


 * This is going in circles about the need for secondary sources, so I'll wait for other editors to comment further, or to go ahead and improve the article.


 * There was no official change in policy about shunning 'inactive' JWs in 2015, so I don't put much stock in the 'thesis'; it seems to cite a 'policy change' from the 15 November 2015 issue of The Watchtower (citing no page number), but that issue of the magazine doesn't contain the word 'inactive' at all nor does it have any articles discussing shunning policies or procedures. I would therefore probably not rely on that article as a source (unless it is poorly citing some other thing like a video released by Watch Tower on the same date). But in reality, JW literature periodically 'warns' JWs to 'avoid bad associations even within the congregation' (e.g. The Watchtower, 1 April 2004, page 13; The Watchtower, 1 May 2000, page 11; The Watchtower, 1 November 1981, page 21), sometimes unofficially called 'soft' or 'pre-emptive' shunning, and it isn't any new 'policy'.-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 13:50, 14 October 2022 (UTC)

I agree with you about the thesis, I edited the comment before your reply here coming to the same realization. I saw it on Google Scholar and it took me straight to the search term, I apologize for not doing enough due diligence there. I'm usually more careful than that. My understanding is that people aren't required to shun people who haven't been DF'd/DA'd, although it definitely still happens. There's more personal choice and leniency involved there.

I agree about going in circles about the need for secondary sources. I think in some situations they're useful, even if the sources used have to be more reliable than some of the ones I've used. I think my argument about the other ones that you haven't mentioned have some merit although it doesn't seem like you nessecarily disagree with me trying to use them? I still think that ommitting content that contextualizes some of the disfellowshipping-worthy offences would be misleading, I'm not interested in 'replicating' those articles.

I could try to improve the article as it is right now but I think it's best that I step back for awhile. I'm interested in what other editor's have to say, too. I'm also going to try to go back to sleep. I haven't really had success with that since like 4 am and maybe that's impacting my judgement. I'm sorry if I've been too confrontational. It's hard to completely detach myself from the subject matter, although I do try. I'm curious if other people share my opinion about the due weight concerns, but if not, I promise I'll let it go. Clover moss (talk) 15:11, 14 October 2022 (UTC)


 * We’re on the same page with most of this, but I have some concerns about the article becoming more of an exposé. I don’t have a problem with using sources about individual cases of shunning, but there are some limitations on how those types of source should be used for generalising. Well known sources that discuss JWs such as Franz, Penton or Holden could be referenced more? I don’t have those sources available though. Let’s wait for other editors’ thoughts and go from there.— Jeffro 77 (talk) 21:43, 14 October 2022 (UTC)


 * I have all of those sources close at hand (as well as Knox and Chryssides). I'm a bit rushed at the moment but if you'd give me specific topics to look for I can look them up and get back with source information.


 * As for undue weight, adding more secular sources (Penton, etc) will help with that, but I think it is important to note that the best sources for what a religion believes is from the religion itself. So while a balancing act might be necessary to make sure that it is not only propaganda from the religion that gets included, having sources from the JW's is not, inherently, a bad thing. Vyselink (talk) 02:29, 15 October 2022 (UTC)
 * I don't want to get rid of the JW sources completely, I just think summarizing beyond the official stance and having some futher context would be useful. If I could rewind time, I'd probably delay starting my first RfC until after trying to discuss things a bit more first and really think about the phrasing before I did so. It's more that I'm not comfortable with the overwhelming reliance on primary sources because they're not always reliable. The information on child abuse being a disfellowshipping offense is technically true but as a lot of reliable sources indicate it's more complicated than that. Without some of that context, I think the article as-is is misleading through ommission. I will say that my intent isn't to make it more of an exposé. There's balance and then there's sensationalization. I can see why people would be concerned it might head too much the other way.
 * I'm curious about your book sources, though. I think I got kind of worked up earlier and went to what was the easiest to find and not nessecarily the absolute best reference material out there. I've been slowly trying to build my own personal library because my local libraries kind of suck for this and I think it's something I want to try and make sense of given my upbringing. Do you have any reccomendations? So far I have Judging Jehovah's Witnesses by Shawn Peters, State and Salvation by William Kaplan, Crisis of Allegiance by James Beverley, and Jehovah's Witnesses and the Nazis by Michel Reynaud and Slyvie Graffard. I'm interested in getting a copy of the infamous Crisis of Conscience by Raymond Franz, but it hasn't quite happened yet. I'm also curious about James Penton's works. But I can't get everything at once, obviously. Clover moss  (talk) 02:45, 15 October 2022 (UTC), edited 03:12, 15 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Anything relevant from those sources would be good to bring up here. Revisiting a separate matter, the article doesn’t say anywhere that child sex abuse (or any other ‘serious sin’) is a ‘disfellowshipping offence’, so there isn’t actually any misinformation there. The ‘offences’ are clearly indicated as ‘judicial situations’, which do not necessarily result in disfellowshipping. But that doesn’t mean that nothing more about the subject should be added.— Jeffro 77 (talk) 03:28, 15 October 2022 (UTC)

Like Clover I'm concerned about the overuse of primary sources on the article. Wikipedia rules like NOR and general principles of what is encyclopedic require independent sources. In many cases a religions official publications can give a skewed view of what the religion has actually taught. For example, official publications of the Catholic and Mormon religions tend to diminish changing or even contradictory teachings, maintaining the impression that the religion's teachings stayed the same. In terms of this article, it may be that jw practices are not exactly what it says in the manual; an independent source is more likely to pick that up. Independent sources guide both what aspects merit coverage on Wikipedia as well as ensuring that we are not promoting any religion's view of itself. (t &#183; c)  buidhe  08:56, 15 October 2022 (UTC)


 * Agreed. WP:Secondary also states that "Wikipedia articles usually rely on material from reliable secondary sources. Articles may make an analytic, evaluative, interpretive, or synthetic claim only if that has been published by a reliable secondary source." Dobble stein 🎲 🎲 talk 21:05, 18 October 2022 (UTC)
 * No one has suggested that the article doesn’t need more secondary sources. Most of the article states what the Watch Tower Society says are its policies, which aren’t “analytic, evaluative, interpretive, or synthetic” statements. But it would be most welcome if people could add more of those types of statements from secondary sources.— Jeffro 77 (talk) 22:34, 18 October 2022 (UTC)

So looking back I jumped into my first RfC way too soon. I should have started a regular talk page discussion and went from there. I have some relevant book sources now and will probably try to improve the content myself at some point in the future. I'll try to take it more slow this time so I don't make the mistake of thinking with urgency that I did here. It doesn't seem like there's much fundamental disagreement here, everyone pretty much agrees that more secondary sources would be a good thing. Anyone know how to actually close this, if that's allowed? I'm assuming that for the most part this has run its course, unless RfCs are meant to stay open multiple months. Clovermoss 🍀 (talk) 22:00, 5 November 2022 (UTC)


 * I have removed the RFC tag, which will close the RFC. The discussion can optionally be hidden in a collapsible section by using closed rfc top and closed rfc bottom templates, though further action is still required so I'm not sure about hiding the discussion just yet?-- Jeffro 77 (talk) 08:37, 7 November 2022 (UTC)
 * Thanks. I was hesistant to just remove the RfC tag because I know for stuff like AfD you shouldn't do that once it's started. I agree that the discussion should stay visible for now. Clovermoss 🍀  (talk) 21:23, 7 November 2022 (UTC)