Talk:Jenni Konner

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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): AmeliaDM. Peer reviewers: Ewilsed, Sandyderulo, Peanuts.ohhenry, JaneDoe22.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 23:21, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Peer Review
Hi AmeliaDM, Your article was great. You have found a lot of information and they were clearly organized to help readers understanding. Moreover it is impressive to have so much information for such a young women in the industry. My screenwriter started working in the 70 ies and I only have a little bit more information then you. You probably did not find the information, but it would have been fun to know a little bit more about her personal life. For example, her date of birth would have been a key information to make us better understand at what point exactly she is in her life. It would also have been interesting if you added quotes of her talking about feminist issues and what she thinks of it. All and all great work! User:Sandyderulo —Preceding undated comment added 23:40, 16 March 2016 (UTC)

Peer Review
Hi AmeliaDM !

I have read your article and I really enjoyed it. It is very well structured and written, I was impressed with the amount of information you found about your screenwriter. I also like your tables and charts that are clear and the overall article is organized.

the only aspect the could be changed is that maybe you could elaborate more in the Early Life section, maybe saying when she graduated from school and what she was studying if you are able to find that out, or other information about her life.

Other than that everything is great !

JaneDoe22 (talk) 23:52, 16 March 2016 (UTC)

Peer Review
Hey, I really enjoyed your article. You were able to give a large amount of information, it was well written and was formatted properly for a Wikipedia article. It was also well structured with use of headings and I thought the Filmography and Award charts were well done.

I know the information must be hard to find but it would be interesting to hear about her time as a script doctor. Also, as someone else pointed out it would be interesting to hear more about her involvement in the Lenny Letter.

I think you did a great job finding so much information on someone who was not on Wikipedia!

Peanuts.ohhenry (talk) 00:19, 18 March 2016 (UTC)

Peer Review
Hi Amelia,

I think the article is strong overall, I would maybe just expand the first introductory paragraph, as well as the early life and personal life paragraphs if you are able to find any other information. As a very small adjustment, I would possibly remove the word "even" from the sentence "The newsletter features political essays, personal stories, interviews, artwork and even an advice column" in the Lenny Letter section so it has more of a neutral tone. I would also possibly avoid using words like "they" and "it" to keep the article specific and flowing nicely.

— Preceding unsigned comment added by Ewilsed (talk • contribs) 01:04, 22 March 2016 (UTC)

Move page to Jenni Konner
It seems like Jenni Konner is more frequently known as Jenni Konner, not Jennifer Konner. If possible, I would like to move this page and flip the re-direct to push Jennifer Konner searches to Jenni Konner. Not sure if this is controversial, so am posting this here to generate discussion in case it is. Personally I found it really confusing I couldn't find Jenni Konner on Wikipedia under her commonly known name, Jenni. Best, Erika aka BrillLyle (talk) 04:08, 12 August 2017 (UTC)