Talk:Jennifer Baichwal

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Student Peer Review The article contains a good amount of information on the subject, however, it suffers from structural, grammatical, and punctuation issues that affect the reading experience. There are also several instances where the language leans toward the promotional, lacking the neutrality of a proper biographical entry. The structure is good and does well to focus on the individual works of the subject in detail, but again, many grammar issues (such as run-on sentences and misplaced punctuation) affect the weight of the information. More research is perhaps needed as certain sections repeat themselves.Callmepapa (talk) 19:06, 6 November 2016 (UTC)

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