Talk:Jennifer Brunner

Neutrality
I had brought up the issue of neutrality a few weeks ago, and had failed to elaborate. A few points: --NeuronExMachina (talk) 20:50, 3 November 2008 (UTC)
 * The article tends to read like it's trying to tell the story of Brunner, rather than just give the facts. The article tends to read somewhat like campaign literature or a magazine feature.
 * "Secretary of State accomplishments" isn't really appropriate as a section heading.
 * Tying back to the first point, quite a few bits of the article seem like they're written to garner sympathy for Brunner and her positions. There's probably more text in the article aimed to providing a sympathetic context for Brunner's actions than there actually is text describing the actions themselves.

Neutrality 2
A blog, Aude Sapere, written by Stephen Hopkins, has raised concerns about the neutrality of the article. Some of his concerns are valid, despite his asserting that the article is being deliberately written with bias by Brunner's campaign. I've tried to allay his concerns about the authorship of the article, and to educate him about the Wiki process, but I've had little success. I think the article's coverage of its subject could be improved by the inclusion of more significant criticisms and other negative information in order to balance out the perceived pro-Brunner tone of the article. I reiterate that there's no reason to believe that anything deliberate has been done to favor Brunner. It's simply that I could see where further improvement could be made. --SSBohio 07:53, 8 March 2010 (UTC)

2014 judicial election
It's been a long time since I've contributed to Wikipedia. I added a small blurb in the introduction about Jennifer's 2014 run for the Ohio Tenth District Court of Appeals. If the sources I've cited aren't good sources, or if I did anything incorrectly, please let me know! --Dylan Henrich (talk) 14:14, 17 March 2014 (UTC)

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Lead
The lead paragraphs of this article are much too long, inconsistent with WP:LEAD guidelines. The lead should briefly summarize the article, but here it is more like a complete reiteration of the article itself. Interested editors are encouraged to review the lead and narrow its focus to be more consistent with Wikipedia formatting. Go4thProsper (talk) 02:51, 18 January 2022 (UTC)