Talk:Jennifer Government

Rewrite
The entire page needs to be rewritten from the ground up. Too much original research and redundancies. Lots42 (talk) 10:09, 8 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Giving that a try at User:Krinndnz/Jennifer Government. Krinn DNZ (talk) 19:39, 26 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Gave that a try, results are now in mainspace. Krinn DNZ (talk) 17:36, 30 July 2020 (UTC)

Reception
It seems like the easiest way to significantly improve the article would be a Reception section and maybe some sales numbers — stuff external to the book, about its impact. I'm out of effort points for this article, but Barry's website has the usual list of "here are reviewers who loved it", so that's somewhere to start. Krinn DNZ (talk) 21:19, 30 July 2020 (UTC)