Talk:Jennifer Moss (actress)

Demons and Equity Strike.
There appears to be missing pieces in this bio. "After the equity strike". I know this is hyperlinked but wouldn't it have been better to tell readers on this page what the "equity strike" was about in connection to Miss Moss.

Similarly, there is mention of her "beating her demons" before there is any indication of what those demons were. Again, it would have been clearer if the "demons" were described before the announcement that she had beaten them.46.7.195.132 (talk) 21:47, 19 June 2018 (UTC)