Talk:Jens Voigt


 * Continued from User talk:otr500

Discussion
I did a preliminary and found some issues. I will provide a complete review at a point but found the general structure to be sound, no image problems, and the article was very readable.


 * None of the issues are what I consider really serious. There are several (some really minor), and I was going to flag the article for 7 days, but if there is availability for immediate response I would prefer to go that route, with some updates, and some discussions at first. Please place any discussions (or mark as done) under each.


 * The lead: Considering the size of the article (well over 30,000 characters) I think the lead could be expanded for better summary coverage. NPOV is an important aspect of Wikipedia and the article appears alright in that area *BUT*: I think the last paragraph should touch on the referenced drug allegations or questioning aspect. The lead is one of my lessor of concerns but important.


 * Sentence structure: There is an excessive use of comma's, especially in the middle of simple sentences, and a couple of places where a semi-colon might be more appropriate. If someone would look at this I would appreciate it.
 * I've started working on that, you are right, some sentences have too many commas. Mattsnow81   (Talk)  19:33, 22 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Dead links: I found at least 3 dead links so these need to be checked and repaired as necessary.
 * Do you mean red links or dead reference links? If it is ref links, could you be so kind as to point them out? Mattsnow81   (Talk)  19:33, 22 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Dead reference links:

Otr500 (talk) 21:37, 22 December 2014 (UTC)
 * #11 (code 500)
 * -Done :Took care of that one with a CNN article implying he his Basso's helper. Mattsnow81   (Talk)  07:05, 24 December 2014 (UTC)
 * #15 (code 404)
 * -Done : I found another link detailing the 2007 Tour of California final results. Mattsnow81   (Talk)  05:20, 27 December 2014 (UTC)
 * #23 (Not sure what it is)
 * #50 (code 505)


 * Check for disambiguation redirects. I think there was one.*There are some conversions missed. There were only a couple and one was 98.5 kilometers.


 * There are a lot of redirects. This is not even a problem per Wikipedia. Some redirects are desired but I feel too many can be distracting. Again, this is just my personal observation.


 * Under the 2011-2014 section there was one part hard to read, "He was fined sign: Fr. or SFr. or FS 1,000...", that is hard to read and the reference simply states "...fined 1,000 Swiss Francs." (ref #49). There are more than a few instances when "Jens Voigt" is used from one sentence to the next but then "behind David Zabriskie.[50] He was also part of breakaways and paced the bunch often.". I assume this is still referencing David so possibly "David Zabriskie "who" was also...". That section is as far as I have gotten. Otr500 (talk) 22:14, 21 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Note: time frame extended for holidays without placing on hold. Also listed at Talk:Jens Voigt/GA1. Otr500 (talk) 02:16, 30 December 2014 (UTC)

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