Talk:Jeremiah J. Park

Family
I have an email out requesting information from him on his family. If anyone happens by before I get anything with information, please fill it in.

Corenbot
I wrote it all myself while referencing the site given, not even sure what that .doc is from.
 * Indeed, that .doc is a mystery. The bot notices the overlap, but can't evaluate the likelihood that a given page is the actual source used. Unfortunately much of what you wrote was identical or very similar indeed to the page at http://susumc.org/index.php/about-us/our-bishop (comparison), and I've had to remove a good part of it (see below). Please feel free to rewrite, but in your own words. Justlettersandnumbers (talk) 14:17, 16 March 2015 (UTC)

Possible References
I'm leaving these here for myself or others to use, if you have anything, please feel to contribute.
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Copyright problem removed
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 * The issue here is that this is factual information presented in chronological order. There is no copyright infringement, as facts cannot be copyrighted. Jerodlycett (talk) 02:08, 18 March 2015 (UTC)
 * Please read Close paraphrasing. As a single example, here's a comparison of a bit of your text with the original:


 * You've omitted a couple of phrases, and moved "at Aldersgate Center in Swartswood, New Jersey" before "in memory of  Henry  G.  Appenzeller"; your text contained not just the facts but the exact language of the source.
 * With very few exceptions, all content here must be written entirely in your own words. Here you could have written, for example: "While there, he helped raise money to build a memorial chapel to Henry G.  Appenzeller ..." or "He was active in the fund-raising for the Henry  G.  Appenzeller memorial chapel ..." or anything else you like, provided it does not re-use the words and form of expression of the source. Justlettersandnumbers (talk) 11:26, 18 March 2015 (UTC)