Talk:Jeremy Bonderman

Huh?
The criticism section says, "The pick was also something as Bonderman has the learning disability dyslexia." The sentence itself sounds sort of dyslexic - it doesn't parse at all. Can someone figure out what that's supposed to be saying? If so, perhaps it could be rewritten to be grammatical and sensical...

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