Talk:Jeremy Lin/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 20:14, 20 April 2016 (UTC)

I shall be reviewing this against the GA criteria as part of a GAN sweep. I'll leave some comments soon. JAG UAR   20:14, 20 April 2016 (UTC)

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Checking against the GA criteria

 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * "out of high school and being undrafted out of Harvard University" - too many uses of "out of". Try undrafted from to mix things up
 * "Lin is one of the few Asian Americans in NBA history, and the first American of Chinese or Taiwanese descent" - is he Chinese or Taiwanese or both?
 * "Still, Lin played more relaxed on the road" - tad informal opening
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * No original research found.
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

This meets the criteria as it is well written and comprehensive. I see no reason to put this on hold  JAG  UAR   10:28, 21 April 2016 (UTC)
 * I have to admit, this is not written by myself, I am just a nominator, I am not the major contributor of this article.  333-blue  11:51, 21 April 2016 (UTC)