Talk:Jeremy Moore

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Missing info
The article doesn't give his place of birth, a nice detail to include. The information under Military Career is about his ancestors, not him; I suggest either changing the heading or moving the info into the section titled Career. It is also nice to see the Early Life info on historical figures, which is missing here. 24.244.23.214 (talk) 07:50, 15 February 2020 (UTC)