Talk:Jeriome Robertson/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Albacore (talk) 19:46, 6 August 2011 (UTC)

Comments

 * Robertson pitched 184.1 innings and posted a win-loss record win–loss record


 * Win-loss record in the infobox, same thing


 * (2002-2003)->> (2002–2003)


 * Robertson has a record of 10–7, 135 strikeouts, and an ERA of 4.07 change to "had"?


 * His 15 wins led all pitchers in the league -caps on the "H"


 * After a month there, in which he pitched four games, going 1–3 with a 5.54 ERA,[4] He same


 * Not a requirement, but alt text would be nice for the infobox photo.


 * URL showing in ref 33
 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Waiting improvements. Albacore (talk) 19:46, 6 August 2011 (UTC) Passed. Albacore (talk) 20:42, 6 August 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Waiting improvements. Albacore (talk) 19:46, 6 August 2011 (UTC) Passed. Albacore (talk) 20:42, 6 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Waiting improvements. Albacore (talk) 19:46, 6 August 2011 (UTC) Passed. Albacore (talk) 20:42, 6 August 2011 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the review; all issues fixed. Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 20:37, 6 August 2011 (UTC)