Talk:Jerome, Arizona/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 04:57, 6 January 2013 (UTC)

I'm always up for a geography lesson! I'm reviewing! TBrandley (what's up) 04:57, 6 January 2013 (UTC)


 * "Location in Yavapai County and the state of Arizona" link the county in the caption
 * Done. -- Another Believer ( Talk ) 17:22, 13 January 2013 (UTC)


 * Per WP:LEADLENGTH, the lead seems to have too many paragraphs, for an article of this size, I would only suggest three.
 * Reduced to three paragraphs. Finetooth (talk) 17:44, 15 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Thanks, FT! -- Another Believer ( Talk ) 17:48, 15 January 2013 (UTC)


 * "Education, government" should be changed to "Education and government"
 * Done. -- Another Believer ( Talk ) 17:22, 13 January 2013 (UTC)


 * Could the climate data table have more specific details; for example, days of snow in a year, and such. See the template documentation for more parameters; resources could be from the National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration, National Weather Service, The Weather Channel, or National Climatic Data Center
 * Added a paragraph about snow, fog, and wind. Finetooth (talk) 18:32, 15 January 2013 (UTC)

There is more to come later, those are some opening comments. TBrandley (what's up) 18:04, 12 January 2013 (UTC)
 * With FT's assistance, I believe your initial concerns have been addressed. Please let us know if you have any others. Thanks! -- Another Believer ( Talk ) 23:37, 15 January 2013 (UTC)

I have further comments:


 * Link "2010 census" per WP:UNDERLINK in the lead
 * Would suggest adding the "United States" portal

Those are the only, quick concerns I have right now, very good job writing this article indeed! TBrandley (what's up) 09:08, 26 January 2013 (UTC)


 * Thank you. I made both changes just now. Would the Arizona portal be better than the United States portal? Finetooth (talk) 18:03, 26 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Added Untied States portal to portal bar, which also links to the Arizona portal. -- Another Believer ( Talk ) 19:06, 26 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Ah, thanks. I overlooked the portal bar. Finetooth (talk) 20:31, 26 January 2013 (UTC)
 * No problem! -- Another Believer ( Talk ) 01:41, 27 January 2013 (UTC)