Talk:Jerry Estrada/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 20:22, 1 February 2019 (UTC)

Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 20:22, 1 February 2019 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * "(full name, Gerardo Hernández Estrada; born January 10, 1958, Monclova, Coahuila) Mexico" - I think the Mexico bit can be removed from this piece of text since it has been established he is Mexican soon after
 * "he has portrayed a rudo (heel, those that portray the bad guys) character, " - should be either renamed as villains or put bad guys in quotation marks
 * "He was originally active from 1978 until 2003 where he was forced to retire due to due chronic injuries caused by his signature bumps to the outside the ring." - when he was forced to retire due to chronic injures caused by his signature bumps outside the ring.
 * "CMLL World Light Heavyweight Championship, Mexican National Middleweight Championship as well as" - the CMLL World Light Heavyweight Championship, the Mexican National Middleweight Championship

Early life

 * "While recovering Estrada worked to support himself by selling chewing gum, polishing shoes, as a line chef and driving trucks." - selling chewing gum, polishing shoes, driving tracks and working as a line chef.

Professional wrestling career

 * "he would receive further training, especially in the early parts of his career by Rafael Salamanca," - better and shorter he received further training early in his career
 * "In an interview Estrada from around his 2003 retirement, " - with Estrada
 * "He slowly developed a "rock and roll" style in-ring character, inspired by various bands of the early to mid-1980s." - various early to mid-1980s bands.
 * "a nickname that has stuck with Estrada throughout his career, even led to Estrada walking to the ring with a living Puma on a couple of occasions." - rewrite the text in bold so it reads as follows: a nickname Estrada had throughout his career. It led Estrada to sporadically walk to the ring with a living Puma.

EMLL/CMLL (1978–1992)

 * "but the show was canceled due to the Mexico City earthquake the day before." - it was
 * "as part of EMLL's emerging Trios division." - its
 * "who bore quite a physical resemblance to Estrada himself and wrestled a similar style." - who heavily physically resembled Estrada and had a similar wrestling style.
 * "the conservative booking style of EMLL kept the regular-sized wrestlers" - the EMLL's conservative booking style

Asistencia Asesoría y Administración / AAA (1992–1997)

 * " Estrada was one of the first CMLL wrestlers to leave to go to AAA," - and join
 * ", but for unrevealed reasons" -, but for undisclosed reasons,
 * "a joint AAA/World Championship Wrestling (WCW) pay-per-view where he teamed with La Parka and Blue Panther," -, where he paired with La Parka and Blue Panther,
 * Wikilink Undercard to Card (sports)
 * "and Arandu lost to Latin Lover, Sergio Romo, Jr.," - the text in should omit the comma per MOS:JR
 * "AA began a working relationship with the North American-based World Wrestling Federations (WWF)" - Federation

Promo Azteca / World Wrestling Council (1997–1998)

 * "During this time he also worked several tours for the Puerto Rico based World Wrestling Council (WWC)" -, he additionally worked several tours for the Puerto Rico-based World Wrestling Council (WWC),
 * "that also includedPierroth, Rico Suave and Villano III." - a space is needed between the words "included" and "Pierroth"

AAA (1998–2003)

 * "A month later Estrada faced the masked Espectro Jr. in a Lucha de Apuestas that Estrada won" - Lucha de Apuestas event that Estrada won.
 * "and, as a result, Espectro Jr. removed the wig" - better; As a consequence, Espectro Jr. removed the wig

Retirement and return (2003–present)

 * "Later that year a Monterrey wrestling promotion known as Poder y Honor held another benefit show for Jerry Estrada, honoring him during the show." - held a second benefit show to honor Jerry Estrada.
 * "losing his retirement match to the team of Perro Aguayo, Jr.," - the text in bold should be written as Perro Aguayo Jr. per MOS:JR
 * "in what was billed as his "retirement match." - the closing quotation marks is missing from the wording in bold

Championships and accomplishments

 * Estrada's claim to the IWAS Tag Team Championship with Juventud Guerrera needs to be cited to a reliable source

Luchas de Apuestas record

 * The third to last row in the record table needs to be cited to a reliable source