Talk:Jesé/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Royroydeb (talk · contribs) 16:59, 12 February 2016 (UTC)


 * The lead is short
 * "on 16 January 2011, he made his senior debut with the reserves" - senior debut with reserves?
 * The last line is also contradictory, the paragraph should be arranged properly.
 * Link Castilla, what is castilla?
 * " he was once again included in the list for the game against" - the heading of the section is Castilla
 * "in a position that did not exist in the main squad" - elucidate this matter man
 * " further four years late" - later
 * Champions League debut" - link it
 * links 26 27 are not working
 * "fine form" - remove fine
 * "His league form continued when " - ??
 * The third para of the 2013- present section use he instead of Jese
 * "netted his fifth in the final against Greece (1–0)" - in which level?
 * "which have been described as "exceptional"" - who described?
 * "Jesé's manager Carlo Ancelotti" - his personal manager?

You have one week to address them (till 22 February). RRD13 দেবজ্যোতি (talk) 08:39, 15 February 2016 (UTC)

12 days have passed and the issues have not been addressed. I am failing it. RRD13 দেবজ্যোতি (talk) 04:48, 27 February 2016 (UTC)