Talk:Jesse L. Brown/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 14:14, 6 December 2011 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * Don't capitalize naval unless it's a proper noun.
 * Fixed. — Ed! (talk) 19:06, 6 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Don't you mean "his"? the schools closer to this family were lower-quality
 * Fixed. — Ed! (talk) 19:06, 6 December 2011 (UTC)
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * Title capitalization in Ecker needs to be fixed. And DMY.
 * Fixed. — Ed! (talk)
 * Actually, your changes here made it worse. The major words of the subtitle need to be capitalized. And fix the spelling of casualties. See Manual_of_Style_(capital_letters).--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:49, 7 December 2011 (UTC)
 * I fixed it as far as I am aware of the policy (capitalized the beginning of each phrase and the proper nouns. If this isn't the correct format I don't know what is. — Ed! (talk) 00:20, 8 December 2011 (UTC)
 * You should have used Smith as your model; every significant word is capitalized, plus the first word. I did it for you.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:33, 8 December 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * How could his enlistment end on 15 April and he remain in the Navy?
 * Fixed. — Ed! (talk) 19:07, 6 December 2011 (UTC)
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Fixed everything. Thanks for your review! — Ed! (talk) 19:06, 6 December 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Fixed everything. Thanks for your review! — Ed! (talk) 19:06, 6 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Fixed everything. Thanks for your review! — Ed! (talk) 19:06, 6 December 2011 (UTC)