Talk:Jessica Cruz

Creators?
Who should be considered the creators of Jessica Cruz? At the moment the page lists Geoff Johns (Writer) and Ethan Van Sciver (Artist) as they were the creative team on Green Lantern #20, where she was first mentioned. In that case, however, she was only seen as a hand, with the rest of her body remaining off-panel. Given that she did not fully appear until Justice League #30 and #31, would it not be more appropriate to list Ivan Reis as the artist responsible for her visual design as we know it? Or perhaps should Jason Fabok be credited, as he was artist at the time of her first appearance as a Green Lantern in Justice League #50. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 67.193.177.249 (talk) 00:25, 19 December 2018 (UTC)


 * So I know this has been unaddressed for nearly two years but characters creators are not necessarily determined by their first appearance, I know Wikipedia doesn't like sources by the subject themselves but in this case, I am not sure where else we would get the behind the scenes kind of knowledge needed to properly source this, Ethan Van Sciver made a video in 2019 detailing the creation of the character and given that the current listed creators are not sourced I feel this is the best source we will have on the matter more than the currently unsourced option. here is the Video Link 64.251.72.74 (talk) 17:31, 12 March 2021 (UTC)

Passive voice
I rarely complain about passive voice, but it seems really excessive in this article (I had professors who were not English professors who had the erroneous notion that passive voice is always bad). The majoroty of sentences start "she is" to describe incidents.--Scottandrewhutchins (talk) 06:25, 14 February 2021 (UTC)