Talk:JetBlue Mint/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 23:56, 23 June 2016 (UTC)

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 * I would add "of this distinction." after "As of May 2016, JetBlue is the only low cost airline in the Americas offering a dedicated premium product"

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 * "The company officially announced its Mint premium class product on September 30, 2013. The service was to be available on flights between New York and San Francisco and New York and Los Angeles, with fares for Mint-class seats starting at US$599 each way.[3]" --> "The company officially announced its Mint premium class product on September 30, 2013; the aforementioned service was to be available on flights between New York and San Francisco and New York and Los Angeles, with fares for Mint-class seats starting at US$599 each way.[3]"

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 * "New routes utilizing the Mint configuration were to be launched to Fort Lauderdale, Las Vegas, San Diego and Seattle. Service to these destinations were to begin during 2017 and 2018.[10]" --> "New routes utilizing the Mint configuration were to be launched to Fort Lauderdale, Las Vegas, San Diego and Seattle, with service beginning during 2017 and 2018.[10]"

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 * "Four of the 16 Mint seats are mini-suites which include a sliding door for privacy.[12]" --> Pleas stay consistent; either "four of the sixteen..." or "4 of the 16..." (Your choice here though.)
 * Rest is great; awesome job!

End of GA Review:
On hold for seven days to address the issues I have raised above. Thanks for the nomination and good luck! Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 23:56, 23 June 2016 (UTC).

all done. SST flyer  10:01, 24 June 2016 (UTC)