Talk:Jill Saward (singer)

Early life
There should be an earlier life section, at least, including where and when born, parents, education, etc.

As the article stands she mysteriously 'appears' as a fully formed band member and visual artist.

The article reads as a job application cv and not as an encyclopaedia article. 31.51.14.209 (talk) 03:12, 13 November 2022 (UTC)