Talk:Jillian Schlesinger

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I have a few suggestions for the first section of your wiki page. Make sure you underline or italicize the name of the documentary in the sentence "Schlesinger is widely known for her documentary Maidentrip which won an Audience Award at SXSW and the Festival Director's Award at Mountainfilm in Telluride."

In the "early life" section I might suggest writing the sentence "Jillian Schlesinger grew up in Ossining, New York and Santa Cruz, California" because it can be kind of confusing and you might be able to get a better word count and be more precise with a little more information. Although, this edit is not needed. Also, you need to cite all the information you got from that section. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jbarbzz23 (talk • contribs) 19:12, 16 November 2015 (UTC)