Talk:Jim Arvanitis

Neutrality
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Basically, the article is full of the sort of rhetoric one would expect in fan works, not encyclopædias. Phrases like "Like all pioneers, Jim Arvanitis was simply ahead of his time", sections entitled "Spreading the Gospel", and the adjective "superhuman" cannot be considered neutral.

Discuss!


 * I agree, its basicaly a fan/promotional piece, possibly written by someone close to the subject. I have gone through and removed the worst of the puffery and promotional term, including the ones you mentioned, It still needs a lot of work to make it more neutral though.Sarahj2107 (talk) 16:54, 14 August 2012 (UTC)

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