Talk:Jim Hobbins/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 15:47, 13 October 2023 (UTC)

I'll review this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk)  @ 15:47, 13 October 2023 (UTC)

Comments
Looks good, putting on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk)  @ 19:37, 17 October 2023 (UTC)
 * I archived the reference links.
 * I'm not sure his exact GPA is relevant.
 * Removed.
 * In the infobox, I think games played is enough. Just my opinion tho.
 * The first three lineman I can think of each have it (Jason Kelce, Jason Peters, Jackie Slater), so I think it should stay.
 * You need to clarify his replacement contract was also with the Packers. It is assumed, but not clear.
 * Clarified.
 * Although some projected him as a mid-to-late round pick who? Scouts? Sportswriters?
 * The source just says that he was "told he was a potential mid-to-late round pick" - I just stated that he went unselected.
 * he was at the age of 34 the oldest player on the team --> he was the oldest player on the team at the age of 34
 * Changed.
 * they had their first child later that year, "first" implies more than one. If that isn't know, then just say "they had a child later that year".
 * Changed.
 * Ref spot check: #2, 5, 8, 12, 20, 21
 * Issues addressed. BeanieFan11 (talk) 00:28, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
 * Looks good, passing. « Gonzo fan2007  (talk)  @ 14:52, 18 October 2023 (UTC)