Talk:Jim Kavanaugh

Soccer/Football Olympian?
I cannot find any source that lists Kavanaugh as part of the US Men's Olympic team (that doesn't appear to be referencing Kavanaugh's personal bio). He was not listed on the roster - https://www.upi.com/Archives/1984/07/14/The-final-roster-for-the-US-Olympic-soccer-team/7764458625600/ - he may have been part of the Men's National Team in 1984, but if he didn't play in the Olympics, is he an Olympian? Noblet97 (talk) 20:04, 16 October 2020 (UTC)
 * I think you're right. I've researched this further and discovered a headline from the St. Louis Post-Dispatch from 08 Sep 1984 that says "Olympic Disappointment Fails to Slow Billikens' Kavanaugh." In the article it states: "Just before the squads were to be made final, the United States Soccer Federation was told that professional players who never had taken part in World Cup competition could play on the Olympic team. . . . Fourteen professional players including St. Louisans David Brcic and Steve Moyers and the Steamers' Ricky Davis, were placed on the team. Kavanaugh, among others, was dropped."Writethisway (talk) 17:08, 2 November 2020 (UTC)

Edit Request
NOTE: I am proposing these edits for FleishmanHillard on behalf of World Wide Technology. I am a paid editor and aware of the COI guidelines. Thanks for your time and consideration. Jon Gray (talk) 02:10, 6 January 2021 (UTC)

Business career
 * We propose updating the second to last line of this section (“WWT’s annual revenue…”) to reflect current information about the company’s annual revenue and total number of employees from a third-party source (The Wall Street Journal), as well as updated sourcing for the company’s ranking as one of the United States’ largest private companies. Revised, this sentence would read as follows:

WWT has an annual revenue of $13.4 billion, ranking it as one of the largest private companies in the United States. The company employs nearly 7,000 people.


 * I tend to think the generic information about WWT belongs on the WWT page and not on this page. I removed most of the generic background. CapitalSasha ~ talk 23:59, 14 February 2021 (UTC)

Wondering about "MS"?
For many years it appears this article said he was "MS amateur player of the year". Anyone know what the MS stands for? First I thought it meant "Missouri", but the abbreviation for the state is "MO", while MS stands for Mississippi. Could have also been MLS, for Major League Soccer, but could not find evidence there is such an award. Sadly, it looks like this was added anonymously back in April 2016. W Nowicki (talk) 22:30, 3 February 2022 (UTC)

Edit Request
NOTE: I’m proposing the following edits for FleishmanHillard on behalf of World Wide Technology. I am a paid editor and aware of the COI guidelines. I’m proposing the following edits in an attempt to improve article organization and include missing information. Please let me know of any questions or comments as you review. Thanks for your time and consideration. Jon Gray (talk) 21:39, 12 September 2022 (UTC)

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Lead
 * Kavanaugh is correctly listed as CEO of World Wide Technology, but he is also a the company’s co-founder. As such, recommend updating the lead to read “CEO and co-founder of World Wide Technology.”

Infobox
 * Given the citations above that validate Kavanaugh as being World Wide Technology’s co-founder, propose updating “Occupation” to read “CEO and co-founder of World Wide Technology.”
 * Please also add Stifel and Privoro under the “Board Member of” line.

Education (newly proposed section)
 * To aid in flow of the article’s narrative, I propose adding a new “Education” section after the Lead section and before “Sports Involvement” that reads as follows:

''Kavanaugh received his Bachelor of Science in business administration from Saint Louis University in 1986. ''

World Wide Technology (proposed section rename and content edits) ''In 2010, Kavanaugh led development of World Wide Technology’s Advanced Technology Center (ATC). The ATC allows WWT’s engineers and customers to evaluate hardware and software offerings from Cisco, Vmware, NetApp, Dell, F5 Networks, Hewlett Packard Enterprise and other tech firms.''
 * Since this section includes information about Kavanaugh’s pre-World Wide Technology career, I propose changing the name of this section to “Career.”
 * To more accurately reflect the partnership between Steward and Kavanaugh in co-founding World Wide Technology, I propose updating the second sentence in this section to read “In 1990, Kavanaugh and David Steward co-founded World Wide Technology …”
 * Please correct spelling of the word “dollors” in the third sentence (should read “dollars”).
 * Please correct spelling of the word “reveues” in the third sentence (should read “revenues”).
 * Recommend adding the following sentences to the end of this section to add more information about a milestone in Kavanaugh’s career/time at World Wide Technology:


 * Yellow check.svg Partly done: Cofounder is not an occupation so I didn’t add that. Since it only includes one sentence I added the Education to the lead instead. The ATC part sounds promotional and doesn’t have much relevance. Aaron Liu (talk) 14:14, 25 January 2023 (UTC)


 * @Aaron Liu All makes sense - thank you! Jon Gray (talk) 22:21, 25 January 2023 (UTC)
 * You too, thanks for your patience! Aaron Liu (talk) 22:55, 25 January 2023 (UTC)

Photo Change Request
NOTE: I’m proposing the following edit and photo change request for FleishmanHillard on behalf of World_Wide_Technology. I am a paid editor and aware of the COI guidelines. ---

Photo Change Request

The photo currently in this article is from 2007. I recently submitted a current photo (2022) to Wikimedia Commons on World Wide Technology’s behalf. I am hoping to have the photo currently used on this article exchanged for this current photo: https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Jim_Kavanaugh,_World_Wide_Technology.jpg

Per the guidelines, I know editors with a COI may add/update article photos, which I’m happy to do, but first wanted to confirm I am clear to do so, or turn this over to another editor to handle. Please let me know how I should proceed. Thanks for your time and consideration. Jon Gray (talk) 15:20, 20 September 2022 (UTC)
 * That photo needs to be cropped to a more close-up view. Can you do it? GenQuest  "scribble" 17:50, 20 September 2022 (UTC)
 * @User:GenQuest Thanks for your reply - i absolutely can do that. Once cropped, would you like to give it another look or would I be clear to make the swap? Thanks again. Jon Gray (talk) 21:04, 20 September 2022 (UTC)
 * Go for it. If anything is ever a problem, they're easily reversed and fixed. I'll review after it's done if you want.  Thanks,  GenQuest  "scribble" 02:41, 21 September 2022 (UTC)
 * Thank you! Jon Gray (talk) 14:59, 21 September 2022 (UTC)

Edit Request – Sports Involvement & Awards
NOTE: I’m proposing the following edits for FleishmanHillard on behalf of World Wide Technology. I am a paid editor and aware of the COI guidelines. Please let me know of any questions or comments as you review. Thanks for your time and consideration. Jon Gray (talk) 22:48, 15 February 2023 (UTC)

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Sports Involvement


 * Second paragraph: Propose adding the following sentence after the first sentence in the second paragraph to round out information about his playing career:

The following year, he was traded to the St. Louis Steamers.


 * Second paragraph: Propose replacing the existing third and fourth sentences of the second paragraph with the following to round out the info those sentences contain and add new information:

Kavanaugh served as CEO of the United Soccer League’s Saint Louis FC from 2014 – 2020, as well as president of the St. Louis Scott Gallagher Soccer Club.

''In 2012, Kavanaugh purchased a minority stake in the St. Louis Blues hockey team. He is also a minority investor in St. Louis City SC, a Major League Soccer franchise launching in 2023.''

Awards
 * Propose adding the following awards to the current list:
 * 2022: Junior Achievement of Greater St. Louis Hall of Fame
 * 2020: American Cancer Society’s St. George National Award
 * 2014: Saint Louis University’s President’s Choice Award at the St. Louis Sports Hall of Fame


 * Also propose the following corrections to two existing entries:
 * 2010: Currently listed as “Saint Louis University Business Hall of Fame,” but the correct name for the award is “Smurfit-Stone Entrepreneurial Alumni Hall of Fame.” Propose updating that listing to account for accuracy.
 * 1998: For accuracy/clarity, propose updating this listing of “Forty under 40” to the accurate name “St. Louis Business Journal 40 Under 40.” Further, the link for this source is broken. If you’d like to replace with a correct link, it can be found here: https://www.bizjournals.com/stlouis/blog/2015/07/jim-kavanaugh-is-most-popular-40-under-40-alum.html


 * Yes check.svg Done Johannes (Talk) (Contribs) (Articles) 18:50, 12 May 2023 (UTC)


 * @Johannes Maximilian Thank you! Jon Gray (talk) 20:08, 12 May 2023 (UTC)

Edit Request – Chronology Correction, Other Proposed Additions
NOTE: I’m proposing the following edits for FleishmanHillard on behalf of World Wide Technology. I am a paid editor and aware of the COI guidelines. Please let me know of any questions or comments as you review. Thanks for your time and consideration. Jon Gray (talk) 15:29, 25 May 2023 (UTC) ---

Awards


 * For ease of reading, I propose reordering the awards currently listed on the page by chronological order – preferably in descending order (2022, 2020, 2014, 2010, 2007, 1998) but I’m totally open to the editor’s preference if ascending order is preferred.


 * I also propose adding the following awards to this list (if accepted, following the same chronological order mentioned above):
 * 2021: Ranked #24 on Glassdoor’s Top CEO list
 * 2020: Ranked #9 on Glassdoor’s Highest Rated CEOs During the COVID-19 Crisis in the ­U.S.
 * 2019: Ranked #86 on Glassdoor’s Top CEO list
 * 2018: Ranked #11 on Glassdoor’s Top CEO list
 * 2017: Ranked #2 on Glassdoor’s CEOs for large businesses in the U.S.

Reply 30-JUN-2023
Regards, Spintendo  19:54, 30 June 2023 (UTC)
 * 1) By their very nature, awards can be subjective, in that they represent a very specific point of view: that of the individual or organization which determines who wins the award and why. To counter this, a good practice is to limit the listing of awards to only those which are independently notable in Wikipedia.
 * 2) To include a list of awards here, please ensure that only awards which are independently notable in Wikipedia are listed in the request.
 * 3) When ready to proceed with the list of independently notable awards, kindly change the  template's answer parameter to read from yes to no. Thank you!