Talk:Jim Kilburn/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sahara4u (talk · contribs) 23:34, 27 January 2013 (UTC)

Comments –
 * Use ndashes (–) instead of hyphens (-) in dates' ranges.
 * Well spotted: bad mistake! Fixed now. Sarastro1 (talk) 17:44, 28 January 2013 (UTC)


 * "He bowled fast-paced off spin." needs a ref.
 * The ref was at the end of the next sentence. I've linked them to make it clear. Sarastro1 (talk) 17:44, 28 January 2013 (UTC)


 * You may link Barnsley Chronicle and the Yorkshire Post.
 * Latter one done now, but I'd prefer to leave the Barnsley Chronicle as there is no article and I don't see the purpose of a red link for a borderline-notability article. Sarastro1 (talk) 17:44, 28 January 2013 (UTC)


 * "Kilburn's writings on the Yorkshire players of the 1930s and 1940s made them well-known to the public as personalities and he wrote several pieces for the Yorkshire Post which became well-known." comma after personalities
 * Done. Sarastro1 (talk) 17:44, 28 January 2013 (UTC)


 * You may link England team and Australia.
 * Did the first; the second is not the team, and linking the country would be overlinking. Sarastro1 (talk) 17:44, 28 January 2013 (UTC)


 * Don't you think the Bibliography section needs a ref?
 * For a bibliography section, the books serve as their own reference, as I understand it. Sarastro1 (talk) 17:44, 28 January 2013 (UTC)

Overall good work, very well-written. I really enjoyed it. Zia Khan 23:34, 27 January 2013 (UTC)
 * I'm busy right now, will take a look later today. Zia Khan 17:50, 28 January 2013 (UTC)

Final assessment

 * GA review (see Good article criteria and WP:GACN)


 * 1) Well written.
 * a (clear and concise prose which doesn't violate copyright laws, grammar and spelling are correct): b ''(MoS for lead, layout, word choice, and fiction:
 * 1) Factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (well-referenced): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (No original research):
 * 1) Broad in its coverage.
 * a (covers major aspects): b (well-focused):
 * 1) Neutral .
 * Fair representation, no bias:
 * 1) Stable.
 * No edit wars nor disputed contents:
 * 1) Illustrated appropriately by images.
 * a b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Conclusion: No other issues. Good work, keep it up! Zia Khan 21:59, 28 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Illustrated appropriately by images.
 * a b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Conclusion: No other issues. Good work, keep it up! Zia Khan 21:59, 28 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Conclusion: No other issues. Good work, keep it up! Zia Khan 21:59, 28 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Pass/Fail: