Talk:Jimmy Frise/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:12, 24 June 2016 (UTC)

Will review. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:12, 24 June 2016 (UTC)


 * General
 * No copyvio/dablink/duplink/external link troubles.
 * Prose looks flawless to me, excellent job!
 * Merci! Curly Turkey 🍁 ¡gobble!


 * Lead
 * The Canadian cartoonist James Llewellyn "Jimmy" Frise I think articles usually open like "James Llewellyn "Jimmy" Frise is a Canadian cartoonist best known for..."
 * Yes, but it's no rule. Curly Turkey 🍁 ¡gobble! 22:55, 27 June 2016 (UTC)


 * Life and career
 * to 12 pages by 1931 Any earlier figure we can compare this with?
 * Hmmm ... I've dropped this. Apparently the whole Star Weekly section started off as 16 pages, and eventually the comics section in it grew to 20 pages. Curly Turkey 🍁 ¡gobble! 22:55, 27 June 2016 (UTC)
 * whit débuted "which debuted"?
 * Fixed. Curly Turkey 🍁 ¡gobble! 22:55, 27 June 2016 (UTC)
 * and 12 December 1925 "on"
 * Fixed. Curly Turkey 🍁 ¡gobble! 22:55, 27 June 2016 (UTC)
 * Frise chatted with the frequent visitors...press without Mr. Frise." Seems to belong more to Personal life.
 * Really? But this is all at work ... ? Curly Turkey 🍁 ¡gobble! 22:56, 27 June 2016 (UTC)
 * Not a big deal, optional. To me it seems this reflects more on his personality. Sainsf  (talk · contribs) 08:16, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

Thanks for the changes. I'm sure this can be promoted now. Cheers, Sainsf  (talk · contribs) 08:16, 28 June 2016 (UTC)