Talk:Jin River (Sichuan)

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Dear fellow Wikipedians, I am a student editor from Simon Fraser University and my group members and I included more details into the lead intro section and rearranged the Anshun Bridge destruction and pollution into the History section. We have more sections coming and we think it is the best to have a seperate section for history. Welcome any comments Zhengyizhilu (talk) 21:07, 16 April 2021 (UTC)

Dear Wikipedians, As a group, I added Geography section that includes the tributaries of Jin River and the origin of Jin River. How is Jin River formed in ths first place and basic physical parameters such as the total watershed area of Jin river and length of its segments. Really appreciate any forms of feedbacks and commentsZhengyizhilu (talk) 21:27, 16 April 2021 (UTC)

Dear Wikipedians, As a group, I added Naming section that has a detailed information about the changing name history of the Jin River that each dynasty of ancient Chinese used and how it evolved to the current name as Jin River. Welcome any comments and corrections.Zhengyizhilu (talk) 21:36, 16 April 2021 (UTC)

Dear Wikipedians, New section called Ecology that talks about eutrophication issue under urban ecology subsection is included. It mainly talks about overloaded phosphorous and nitrogen. Welcome to add new subsections under ecology if you find anything new. Thanks Zhengyizhilu (talk) 21:40, 16 April 2021 (UTC)

Dear Wikipedians, The original context about Anshun Bridge destruction and rebuilt was included at the end of the pollution subsection which is more appropriate under the current content of sections. The words used in the original pollution part mentioned that the river was choking and flooding were backed up with proper citation and changed into more scientificly accurate words of sedimentation caused conjestion.Commercial Navigation subsection was added under the History section before pollution.Zhengyizhilu (talk) 21:50, 16 April 2021 (UTC)

Dear Wikipedians, A recreation and tourism section was added to talk about the night tour activities along the river bank of the Jin River, it describes the recreational and tourism types of activities going on along the Jin River. Most of these activities are asscociated with water as their central element.Zhengyizhilu (talk) 21:54, 16 April 2021 (UTC)

Dear Wikipedians, The picture that was orginally located in the lead section about Anshun Bridge was placed at the pollution section where the destruction and rebuilt of of Anshun bridge was mentioned. Also, the general information box about Jin River course is placed at the lead section in order to give a general overview of the river. Welcome any comments.Zhengyizhilu (talk) 02:47, 17 April 2021 (UTC)