Talk:Jingle All the Way/GA1

GA Review
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Article is a great shape not much to fault it on, just a few minor issues on then it's a pass. I'll fix some of the issues myself, the following still need to be fixed:


 * "During the chase, Howard keeps running into Officer Alexander Hummell" - Chase? What chase? Rephrase to something like "During his search for the action figure, ..."
 * " Howard hooks up with a band of brand-spoofing crooks..." - Explain why he "hooks up" with them and why he fights with them. Also swap "hooks up" with something more professional.


 * "Unused shops in the Seventh Place Mall area were spruced up to..." - Replace "spruced up" with something more professional.


 * The Rotten Tomatoes figures have changed slightly. - Update figures and accessdate.

Reviewer: Kollision (talk) 04:55, 2 February 2011 (UTC)


 * Okay, I think I have fixed all of these issues. Thanks very much for the review. Gran2 10:48, 2 February 2011 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Pass or Fail:

Congrats, GA pass. - Kollision (talk) 10:58, 2 February 2011 (UTC)


 * It might be nice to fix links to dab pages in an article (or asking for them to be fixed) before awarding a GA pass in future. The toolbox top right is there for a reason.  Alternatively, installing User:Anomie/linkclassifier.js makes such links immediately visible, and I count five in this article (I've fixed one in the lead, but will leave the others for people who know which target is right). BencherliteTalk 11:08, 2 February 2011 (UTC)
 * Yes I really should have. I simply forgot. - Kollision (talk) 13:34, 2 February 2011 (UTC)
 * No problem; I'm a convert to the linkclassifier.js (for this and other reasons) now that I'm using it! BencherliteTalk 13:36, 2 February 2011 (UTC)