Talk:Jiya Jale: The Stories of Songs/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kavyansh.Singh (talk · contribs) 04:08, 3 January 2022 (UTC) Nominator: Nicholas Michael Halim (talk · contribs) at 08:19, 26 August 2021 (UTC)

General

 * Based on my comments on Talk:In the Company of a Poet/GA1, try to fix similar issues. Will continue soon. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 16:48, 3 January 2022 (UTC)

Prose

 * She got the idea in 2016 — At the beginning of every paragraph, we'll need to specify "Kabir"
 * the English translation — linking "English" appears like overlinking
 * Nasreen Munni Kabir came up with — remove the first name.
 * fifteen two-and-a-half-hour sessionsv. $2 1/2$ — consistency needed
 * In translating his songs — should be "While translating the songs"
 * "The whole narration ... bring out the — add after the ellipsis
 * "For lovers of Hindi film — avoid starting a sentence with a quotation
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Images

 * Images can take ALT text
 * Images are licenced fine!