Talk:JoAnn Elam

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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 29 January 2019 and 7 May 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Milipede7.

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Hello there! So far the research presented is solid, however, more material could be added. Consider adding more about their relevance to Chicago as well. Also consider adding page titles and headers (can be found on the toolbar at the top) to paragraphs and organizing the article into sections such as early life, works, career, etc.; that way there will be a distinct flow within the article. Vcbrowne (talk) 02:58, 19 October 2015 (UTC)

Films as potential section
I would consider developing a section to discuss Elam's films in more depth, specifically the way they've been received critically. There, you could also indicate why films like Rape were important politically AND aesthetically. Also, you need to give a citation for the claim "Rape has been seen and applauded by many." Who constitutes "many"? This needs to be cited / substantiated. AmyDeer (talk) 13:40, 21 October 2015 (UTC) What does "Everyday life documentary film" mean? Can you clarify or point to a source here? AmyDeer (talk) 13:41, 21 October 2015 (UTC)

The research is pretty good but there can be more. Talk about more works that JoAnn has done (what they're about, how they came about, etc.) Also, add some links to your words Take out "The School of the Art Institute" title as well (It's misleading)

The research is pretty good but there can be more. Talk about more works that JoAnn has done (what they're about, how they came about, etc.) Also, add some links to your words Take out "The School of the Art Institute" title as well (It's misleading) Mrusen (talk) 01:36, 2 November 2015 (UTC)

Edits from Class
The research is pretty good but there can be more. Talk about more works that JoAnn has done (what they're about, how they came about, etc.) Also, add some links to your words Take out "The School of the Art Institute" title as well (It's misleading) Mrusen (talk) 01:36, 2 November 2015 (UTC)

Edits from Class
The research is pretty good but there can be more. Talk about more works that JoAnn has done (what they're about, how they came about, etc.) Also, add some links to your words. Take out "The School of the Art Institute" title as well (It's misleading) Mrusen (talk) 01:37, 2 November 2015 (UTC)