Talk:Joan Hutton

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Hey there! I'm in your film course and I'm reviewing your thing because I have to... In all honesty there wasn't a lot for me to actually edit in your entry but I feel like there are some changes you could make to make this entry look a little more legitimate. Firstly, link all things in this entry that can be found somewhere else on wikipedia. I guess this is kind of like saying (hey if you don't get this word or if you want to look a little more into this subject, look here!) This goes for any important defining words like in your intro thing but it also goes for pieces of work. There are a lot of cool pages that talk about the work you use to talk about your filmmaker already! By linking them you can also add your filmmaker to that page making them easier to be found and a little more relevant on wikipedia! Good job so far. your references list looks pretty great for a first entry.

-RayneEmily (i'm not sure how to do that thing where you link to me but this is my attempt :P you can see me in the course dashboard if you are really that curious)

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Sarahburhan. Peer reviewers: RayneEmily.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 14:06, 18 January 2022 (UTC)