Talk:Jocelyn Moorhouse

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Hello,

I have just a few suggestions on how to improve this page a little. One thing needed is to fix the references at the bottom of the page, as some are not correctly formatted. I also noticed that there were quite a few links to other pages in the introductory section, but none in the 'Life and Career' or 'Awards' sections. I think added these would make the page look better and be more user friendly. If you have any questions with my comments just let me know.

--Ryan Ernecoff (talk) 18:14, 13 November 2015 (UTC)Ryan Ernecoff