Talk:Jody Deming

Talk 2017
Looks good. I'd be really curious to read more about the arctic ice missions. Are there any wiki pages you could link to so I could read more about the missions? Cwlind1997 (talk) 17:45, 19 April 2017 (UTC)

Looks like a legit wiki article! A few comments. It looks like you need a header for the page! You have "what" written twice in the Education section. I would add a few commas around the mention of NASA in the Research section. Good references! Drenniks (talk) 04:08, 20 April 2017 (UTC)

This is looking excellent! You've really mastered the neutral voice needed for a wiki article, and the content thus for is very good. I'd like to see more content in the research section for the final edition, that's one section you can afford to add a lot of details. Malthorp (talk) 02:51, 24 April 2017 (UTC)