Talk:Joe Alwyn/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: BritneyErotica (talk · contribs) 14:09, 17 August 2023 (UTC)


 * ✅ all.  ℛonherry  ☘  12:23, 20 August 2023 (UTC)
 * It looks good. I should highlight a grey area I've noticed. Many Good Articles with actors have tables similar to yours. Some have empty Ref. columns, some have entirely full Ref. columns, and some have a bit of both. On some pages specifically for an actor's filmography, these tables are completely referenced. Realistically, it's actually best to have these Ref. columns filled with reliable sources (so I made a slight mistake recommending that if they aren't required to be removed).
 * If possible, you should reference each line in his Filmography and Discography. For example, in the Television table you could use this citation for A Christmas Carol and this citation for Conversations with Friends. These sources may help fast track this change: Joe Alwyn on Sweet Nothing and Joe Alwyn on Exile. Ensure these citations are as reliable as possible (all the others look good). BritneyErotica (talk) 14:31, 20 August 2023 (UTC)
 * ✅!  ℛonherry  ☘  18:57, 20 August 2023 (UTC)
 * role
 * He and became a member of This was definitely an accident (a random new line) but should be fixed.
 * One more thing: There seems to be excessive wikilinking. If you read the main body of this article, you'll see a lot of blue (and many times a little of linked things in a single sentence). A lot of this is unnecessary. For example, I've seen the shows/movies linked in the short description (which is fine) but then linked every other time throughout the article. Generally, linking it in its first instance is sufficient.
 * See: In 2022, Alwyn starred in the drama series Conversations with Friends—a Hulu adaptation of the 2017 novel of the same name by Irish author Sally Rooney. I like how it links to the book as that could be useful, but the name of the series does not need to be linked again. Likewise, I see a lot of genres or general terms like "film adaptation" being linked (or "football" and "rugby"; the linked BA is good though). I think the easiest way to cut down on this over-linking issue is to remove wikilinks to general terms and linking more important words (such as links to a name or organisation) once when they are first mentioned.
 * You may find this page interesting in relation to this WP:LINKCRISIS. BritneyErotica (talk) 19:17, 20 August 2023 (UTC)
 * ✅  ℛonherry  ☘  13:11, 21 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Sorry for the late reply. I decided to be "be bold" (see: WP:BOLD) and make the final changes myself (including some basic copy editing and further reducing the over linking issue) as they were quite minor. Everything now looks good and I've gone ahead and passed this nomination. BritneyErotica (talk) 13:30, 24 August 2023 (UTC)