Talk:Joe Burrow/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Bait30 (talk · contribs) 21:47, 30 October 2020 (UTC)

I'll take a look at this. My review should be complete sometime within the next 7 days.  Bait30  Talk 2 me pls? 21:47, 30 October 2020 (UTC)

Lead

 * lead looks good.

Early years

 * "The elder Burrow, whose last coaching position was defensive coordinator for the Ohio Bobcats for more than a decade, retired after the 2018 season in part to be able to see all of Joe's games in his final college season.": personally, this sentence might a little bit out of scope. (3b)
 * "One day while visiting the office": unclear what "the office" is referring to. (1a)
 * "the seven year old had a future": might be better to say "the seven year old Burrow had a future" (1a)
 * "Jimmy Burrow": try to keep it consistent. either Jim Burrow or Jimmy Burrow, but not both. (1a)
 * Done. Lucky7jrk (talk) 15:16, 31 October 2020 (UTC)

College career

 * looks good

Professional career
Joe played in 17 games in 2021, not 16. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Muthchri (talk • contribs) 16:55, 17 June 2022 (UTC)
 * "Burrow was one of 58 players invited to the draft, which was held virtually due to social distancing regulations arising from the COVID-19 pandemic, where he was selected first overall by the Cincinnati Bengals." The "which was held virtually...pandemic" part isn't necessary in my opinion. And I would specify which draft. (1a/3b)
 * "He became the first rookie n NFL history": fix minor typo (1a)
 * Statistics table: instead of making "Career" an external link, just cite it in the same style as the College statistics table. In other words, make it a proper citation. (2b)
 * Done. Lucky7jrk (talk) 15:20, 31 October 2020 (UTC)

Personal life

 * it's fine

Images

 * All images are related with appropriate copyright tags.

 Bait30  Talk 2 me pls? 23:29, 30 October 2020 (UTC)